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Siamese Twins

Siamese twin pears 'pon the pear tree Soaking up autumn's sun Soon their time to cling will be gone Frost will touch rose and be done

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/27/2013 12:42:00 PM

Siamese twin pears……double the pleasure. Enjoyed this poem.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2013 11:05:00 AM

that would be good to eat, lol, two pears for the price of one!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/26/2013 7:53:00 PM

enjoyed the mellow backdrop of a season for these twins... fine write, sara..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2013 1:33:00 PM

amazing Sara, basking in the sun... sadly the image will change on the twins... love this..LINDA

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 10/26/2013 8:12:00 AM

Love the brevity, Sara. You managed to convey so much in so few words; I admire that quality in a poet. Enjoyed this very much; kudos :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2013 1:39:00 AM

A nice little poem on those twin trees. They sound wonderful. Hope you feel a little better by Saturday.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/25/2013 8:02:00 PM

This is such a beautiful write my friend, your rhyming is purely wonderful! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece or natures beauty! What a lovely poem, Great work!!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/25/2013 6:10:00 PM

Yes but the rose while it lived gave pleasure to the eyes, and warmed the heart as this poem did so unto mine. thank you for sharing this beauty with me. Also yes anne story was sad and it has always touched me, that's why I had to write about it.