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Show Me Everything

Wont me your dance
Dance me through the night
Show me everything you`re about

Don`t you..just fade away
No fake smiles,please
Smile with everything you got

Let us..swarm around eachother
Like sweet hummingbirds
May love be complete tonight

Fly me away
Take me to the moon
I just know we can`t be apart

Your beauty..I cheerish so much
Take me to your heaven
To the inside of your precious heart

Let me..feel your warmth and presence
Feel your sunrise
All through the day `til sunset closes the day


March 31st 2012

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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 10:30:00 PM
    Really really nice and gentle....I loved it!

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 2:44:00 PM
    Hi Arild another very good write about love, ireally enjoyed this thanks so much, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 9:30:00 PM
    An ahh moment Arild so lovely- thank you for sharing. And re your question on where i have been- I have a large family and so much happens that take me away from what I would like to do- I am ever grateful though to be apart of the solutions to helping them, but it does mean I and my passion to write and read must take second place. Love and blessings, bren : )

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 10:55:00 AM
    I know who your real dance partner is so....I blush for her right now..You wrote one of the most amazing Fred Estaire like dances...that's why every gal wants one spin on the dance floor with him...ha ha So smooth your tempo and graceful your words...Amazing!....Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 11:19:00 AM
    no fake smiles please!

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 9:34:00 AM
    mesmerizing lines that capture then captivate a heart with this romantic dance of luv Arild.. sooo lovely luv..

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Lovely verse Arild love the first tow lins in last stanza very romantic xx

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 9:36:00 AM
    me again :) I saw your comments in your blog :D and I totally agree with you-- we sure are connected in some way or another, isn't that just so cool and so amazing when you actually get to pinpoint how you are connected to somebody :D and yes, isn't people (& surrounding) watching just fascinating? You are so right, makes waiting (especially) less boring ;).

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 9:20:00 AM
    This is another write today had a romantic slant to the word "everything"--- very beautiful thoughts you have here Arild and I think it's amazing when you find that someone to take part in that everything :D --happy to see you back here :) btw that is an awesome image of the sunset in your blog pic :D hugs :D

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 9:24:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poem tonight!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 1:13:00 PM
    Love the romantic feel and the need to experience everything that comes with it.. Enjoyed this Arild, glad to see you back :), love & hugs Wilma

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 12:21:00 PM
    i sway with you, arild... sweetly done with natural flow of words and thoughts.. shall we all dance??:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 3:47:00 AM
    Lovely romantic xxx Hugs xxx

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 11:24:00 PM
    Arlid, this is a very lovely poem... I'm glad you found the one person who makes you feel like this..... have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 10:31:00 PM
    Such sweet, romantic lines you have shared tonight, Arild. Lovely! I'm happy to read your poem tonight. I hope you had a wonderful and very relaxing vacation. Happy Easter, Rhonda :))

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Very awesome poem! Love the hummingbird bit! So cute. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 8:40:00 PM
    wow, this is so sweet and loving, ARild. I really enjoyed seeing this tonight. And yes you have been bitten by the poetrySOUP bug as well as by the poetry bug. Together they are LETHAL combination.

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 8:35:00 PM
    That is beautiful Arlid! Love flowing from the heart...

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 5:15:00 PM
    A lovely romantic interlude Arild I enjoyed the verse hope your doing well and enjoying a great weekend hugs vie