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Shot Away Dreams

A joyful life was meant to be Part of my future destiny Filled with lots of dreams and hope I was planning to elope With the one who stole my heart Special moments not forgot Staying with you every minute That your mind and soul will give it Now those dreams do not exist Just words upon a lonely list That will never be fulfilled Since a gunman shot and killed The future hopes from under me My whole world gone instantly Songs are sung and prayers are said As dark thoughts fill up my head Seeing you fall slowly down Blood is splattered all around Holding you till your last breath Tightly in my arms to catch One last touch and loving feel Before it becomes too real Sinking in that you are gone When I wake to a new dawn Without the love that I adore In my heart forever more Knowing there will always be An angel watching over me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2014 10:19:00 PM
A sad tale well told. Congrats on the win too.
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Date: 3/29/2014 3:43:00 PM
Sad but beautiful. enjoyed...lots. congrats. // paul
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Date: 3/29/2014 5:34:00 AM
Well constructed and penned poem. Congrats on a fine win, robin
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Date: 3/29/2014 1:12:00 AM
Robin, Congratulations! Thank you for the support. Enjoy my latest blog if you like. It's called "Lunatics On The Loose." Stay tuned, I'll have a new contest coming up in a few days. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:52:00 AM
Richard and I are in total agreement this morning. Much love to you, Sweet Pea; thanks for sharing all your new pieces <3
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:25:00 AM
I hope this is not real Robin. Very sad tale but very well told.
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