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She Was Beautiful

Like a bird " they say she was. Like a bird of white wings. She would come every night. From 8:00 to 10:00, on a corner, under a light she would stand. I was little when I first saw her. It was on a Winter night. She was wearing a white coat. She was beautiful. I saw her again and again, smoking and walking on that corner, but always from 8:00 to 10:00. Sometimes she would leave with a friend, but she would always come back. I remember her like that. Always standing, smoking, or walking. Night after night. The years passed and I grew up. One day I saw her, she looked different. It was like her beauty was fading away. Many winters had passed, but she was still wearing the white coat. Not many friends stoped anymore. One day I looked towards the corner and it was empty. She was not there. The light was still there, but the corner looked lonely. The days passed, but she didn't returned. Where had she gone? I felt sad.Who was she? I don't know. Her name she never told me. When her beauty was gone - she was seen no more...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/28/2013 12:15:00 PM
This was very nicely done Lucilla ;} I'm looking for your Devil in A Bottle" poem. I will find it. I might read a few others before I do ;} glad you liked my " Alcohol ;}
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Date: 6/5/2012 7:35:00 AM
WOW! BEAUTIFUL.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/5/2012 4:54:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and liking my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla
Date: 2/3/2012 3:50:00 PM
A true moment of poignancy and growing up. This actually stopped me in my tracks as although you never actually expressed why she was there it was delicately and compassionately expressed. Ps the suggestion of the light (clever) as you didn't do as expected, turn it out, you left it on to shine on nothing.. You are an observer for sure! Lovely write ... Karen ( smiling)
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Date: 2/3/2012 5:20:00 AM
I liked this one. Very well done. Very mysterious
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:50:00 PM
Very expressive work about this hushed hushed topic..Enjoyed reading..Sara
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:31:00 AM
kept me reading. nice....ly written. Lucinda
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:36:00 AM
Can't put my finger on it, but this was captivating till the end. I like how each verse made me stop and wonder. Plz stop by and read a few.
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