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Shattered Love

Tell me not who you are
Shall I be bound knowing you from afar
As lightning and thunder striking through
Snippets of love fantasy shatter without clues
Ask me not why I cry
When tears of woe would not dry
Ask me not what I would do
The answers are none than a mist of hazy fumes
Deep down in the beating heart
Agonizing pain drives me nuts
Try not tainting me with your voice of saints
Long gone are the comforts, only my hatred remains
Will you just go away
My pathetic scream starts to sway
You'll leave without trace anyway
Just to pounce on another prey
As web of lies untangle or so let it be
Curiosity burning beyond boundaries
Are you a cunning spider you better not be
For my only love shatters with infinite queries
If loving you is an endless fray
It is time for me to live my way
If you plead a chance but when silence stays
You could only hope it does not turn out this way.

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:05:00 PM
    TIEW, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Tiew , CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun in closing my contest called ... ""A week into my poem""- Take care and enjoy my blog if you like... have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:04:00 PM
    Tiew, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    Shiu Theng Avatar Tiew Shiu Theng
    Date: 6/24/2013 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello, Skat! I'm really happy to know that you like my poem. Well, this is a brief introduction of myself. I'm from Malaysia & am a Law student. I'm so into the art of poetry since I was in primary school. It's been my long-term passion and I'm glad to have joined this platform full of distinguished poets like you. I'm still a novice though; hope you and the others would aid me in improving my subsequent workpiece. Thanks again for the warm greetings, Skat!