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Shalt Not

Run into open arms Inviting secret charms Race behind darkened doors Harlots, rapists, worldly whores Digress Speak tones of love Beautiful looking doves Heavens gold is free and pure Tempt me not just to be sure Fly Wise to listen but even glisten As a drop of water listen On angels wings now glide Free from earthly pride Thou shalt not hide!

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2012 4:18:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. Unique piece. God Bless Phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/20/2012 8:36:00 PM

Perfect title to draw me in and find out what goes on here. A whole gamut of situations and emotions to make this a poem to read more than once. Luv, Lizzie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2012 1:31:00 PM

striking freestyle etched on the door of creativity, tim... i like the pauses and tone!..:) huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2012 5:59:00 PM

Good advice based on truth..Enjoyed reading this eve...Thanks for stopping by my work..Yes, I see the parallel between Frost and my Haiku..It could be that my sub-conscience was using my reading of Frost's work many times ...I wonder sometimes when I write, where what goes onto the paper comes from..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/10/2012 1:21:00 PM

This is a truly awesome write my friend! Great Work!!