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Shades of Autumn As autumn twirls her colored skirt Tree’s brilliant leaves dance round and round. When the joyous dancing ends they Display a carpet on the ground. Hues that merge...orange, gold and red, Even more beautiful in death... Their patchwork quilt on forest floor Still captures ways to take our breath. Bounty beneath the harvest moon Blesses each family abode With crops that feed a hungry world From tiny seedlings that were sowed. To work the fields is no small feat. Harvesting from our sacred earth, Farmers with hard work now complete, Begin in winter t'ward spring's birth. Just like the seasons we too grow Beginning with spring of our birth, Into our summer bearing kin... Beholding joys of autumn's worth. Then lastly winter white arrives With wisdom spread across the years. With grace of God in how we've lived We share good-byes with snow flake tears. © Connie Marcum Wong

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Date: 9/19/2019 6:12:00 PM
Came across this gem and once again Autumn is ready to twirl around. Love, SuZ
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/20/2019 6:40:00 PM
It's so nice to hear from you SuZ. I am so happy to see autumn on her way in. My favorite time of year! The weather has dropped about 5° cooler and I'm so happy about that. Summers are difficult for me here. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I hope you're doing well and enjoying this coming fall. I hope autumn will inspire you to post a poem at PFT. We miss you. xxoo
Date: 7/2/2018 8:34:00 PM
G'day Connie … what a beautiful picture painted in words. Autumn does have that magical touch of beauty and bounty - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:19:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment Lindsay. I miss flying down under so much. I will have to plan another visit one day when my health improves. Enjoy your lovely fall. xxoo
Date: 12/10/2016 11:34:00 AM
Awe-inspiring from beginning to end, much like the seasons. Quite lovely imagery Connie, love that first twirl round.
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Date: 12/2/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my short stories and for your kind comments, Connie. Lainey
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Date: 12/2/2016 6:49:00 AM
How beautiful, Connie. Thank you for sharing. As I love out my kitchen window at this moment, the trees stand naked in the chill of a grey December morning. Lainey
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Date: 11/28/2016 9:50:00 AM
amazing shapes of beauty stylishly constructed with words ... a great poem ... the final line is fantastic ...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/29/2016 3:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Probir. The tears will be tears of happiness. : )
Date: 11/24/2016 11:24:00 PM
Part 2 (I needed some humor, humor warms us in winter) I must favor this poem that has touched me so much in so many ways. I want to favor it. Excellent, enduring poetry, my 'gilfriend and a WOW
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Date: 11/25/2016 3:21:00 AM
CayCay, you always put such thought and care into your responses. You seem to get more out of the meaning than I do! I am always impressed by your insightful comments and so grateful that you take precious time to leave such lovely comments. It means a lot to me. Thank you very much my friend, not only for this wonderful comment but for the fave! Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 11/24/2016 11:22:00 PM
I was doing fine, enjoying being awed by your poem and then you went and did it, your snow flake tears woke my real tears. Funny how many decades we, or at least me, try to claim Autumn until forced to admit that winter has arrived. It is very sad to me, indeed. This is poetry at its finest, you brought Autumn's magic to rhythmic life both fresh and authentic; then subtly nature became we humans and, well - I'm dying.
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Date: 11/23/2016 6:51:00 AM
Oooh that last line, you build up to it wonderfully, what a bitter sweet reward.
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Date: 11/25/2016 3:24:00 AM
Thank you Scott. I keep doubting myself and almost did not post this. Everyone here writes so beautifully. I appreciate your wonderful comment. Thank you very much. The tears will be happy ones. : )
Date: 11/23/2016 6:51:00 AM
Connie, I love your images. You have captured the spirit of change behind the seasons. Very meaningful. Have a wonderful THanksgiving!! Kathy
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Date: 11/20/2016 8:25:00 PM
A common theme but so beautifully done by your pen, Connie. YOu are a poet of great wisdom. Thanks for all you do for us as poets on this Thanksgiving week!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/20/2016 9:38:00 PM
I hope you have a lovely Thanksgiving with family Andrea. Thank you for your sweet comment. Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 11/20/2016 6:26:00 PM
You have penned a wonderful poem, my friend. You captured human life as it really is. Excellent piece..........A.m.
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Date: 11/20/2016 9:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for such a beautiful and insightful comment Afolabi. I appreciate it. : )
Date: 11/20/2016 2:01:00 PM
- A wonderful painting of autumn shadows, Connie - Beautiful with big B !! - hugs // and a 7 //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2016 9:35:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. I bet your weather is getting pretty cold now. Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 11/20/2016 1:57:00 PM
You have embroidered Autumn with the perfect hues of the season dear, Connie! A fantastic writing ! A seven dear friend!
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Date: 11/20/2016 9:34:00 PM
Our lives are like the seasons Demetrios. Thank you very much for such a lovely comment. ; )
Date: 11/20/2016 12:07:00 PM
This is just such a beautiful description Connie. You are so right in saying that even in death those leaves bring us so much joy.
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Date: 11/20/2016 7:00:00 PM
Yes, and I wanted it to have a metaphoric message in that when we pass friends and family remember us as beautiful. What part of Ireland are you from Jean? I have visited many cities in Ireland and may be familiar with it. Thank you for such a lovely comment. ; )
Date: 11/20/2016 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Mrs Connie. They just keep coming, faster and faster:(
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Date: 11/20/2016 2:46:00 PM
I know what you mean. I decorate my house for the different seasons and it seems like I just get one season up when I have to take it down for the next. My children and grandchildren love it when I decorate so I continue. Seems the older we get the faster time flies. Thank you Daniel. ; )
Date: 11/20/2016 8:35:00 AM
Exquisitely written, Connie. "snow flake tears"... a beautiful expression. And what a fine way to hide our tears.
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Date: 11/20/2016 2:26:00 PM
Yes Lin, soft tears because we must eventually say goodbye. I wouldn't mind leaving except that I will have to say goodbye to my children and grandchildren one day. Thank you for your lovely comment. ; )
Date: 11/20/2016 12:29:00 AM
i have experienced the glory of autumn in other countries.. why does this season end so fast?.. what a lovely, intimate read from you, connie.. huggs
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Date: 11/20/2016 2:22:00 PM
Yes Nette, our tropical weather here doesn't see much fall either except for the lovely rain which makes our island cooler. Thank you very much for your nice comment. ; )
Date: 11/19/2016 10:39:00 PM
We have had a late autumn here, so this poem goes well with the goodbye's. we are supposed to have snow by Monday! Lovely poem!
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Date: 11/20/2016 1:25:00 PM
This season always passes too soon. In two days my daughter needs to be in Denver and has never driven on ice or snow. It is worrisome for us. Thank you Arthur. ; )
Date: 11/19/2016 10:15:00 PM
Very nice!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/20/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thank you Abdullah. ; )

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