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Seven Times Ten Birthday Girl

i wonder when your seventy will you be just as kind a little old lady wearing glasses aged by troubles and time i wonder when your seventy will you remember me someone who wrote of you who's in his heart you'll be i wonder when your seventy and you remember all the times that i woulds write you poems dispight the jealous minds i wonder when your seventy two thousand fourty something or maybe in the fifties it's rude to make presumptions i just hope when your seventy that you are seventy "FINE! widowed, available or just divorced willing and able to be all mine (happy birthday special lady. I'm sending you a unicorn for your b- day.)

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Date: 12/2/2013 1:59:00 PM
Reminds me of the Beatles song - "When I'm 64" Thank you for your kind words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/23/2013 3:16:00 PM
very nicely done, now can I ride my unicorn ;} LOL my birthday is the same day as Linda's . I can see why you won with this delightful poem ;}
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:34:00 AM
What beautiful words. I'm close now to seventy and wonder if you'd wait for me. Great birthday tribute.
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Date: 10/17/2013 2:08:00 PM
What lady would even think to resist to be yours after such a confession of undying love? Wonderfully done!
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Date: 10/12/2013 11:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win honoring PD..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2013 10:53:00 AM
Awesome, John. Congratulations on bagging the top placement with this jewel. The gift of the unicorn gives it an extra special touch. Nice work, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 10/10/2013 7:47:00 AM
Ohhhh great one.....no wonder its top of the list!!!!! Awesome......congratulations .....!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:01:00 PM
Congrats on the first place win in the contest, John
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:54:00 AM
Nice poem for the birthday girl.Congratulation on your 1st in the heart of Her
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:32:00 PM
awesome sweet win..............SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:14:00 AM
Hello John ... 28, first place!! ... certainly hard to choose .... all very friendly and caring, to the B-day girl Linda!! - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2013 1:26:00 AM
I will remember you until the day I leave for good. Very deserved win. Congrats. Hope you are doing alright these days. I have been saying alot of prayers lately. Love your forever friend, Colleen
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:59:00 PM
Thank you for the sweet Unicorn John,.. It has ARRIVED my sweet birthday! Thank you for the awesome birthday poem and dedication. Yes I am silly, and enjoy having fun. Sometimes I wanna celebrate the joy knowing others enjoy life sharing simple SMILES with love. God Bless <3 always & forever ** LINDA
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:56:00 PM
How can I thank you for putting me at the top of this honor? Its rare that I get this kind of rating. Sleepy good nite. Dream bow.
Date: 9/29/2013 12:31:00 AM
smiles, smiles, nothing but smiles, John
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:12:00 PM
I am smiling... hugs... LINDA
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:42:00 AM
- A enjoyable birthday poem,John ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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