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Seven Senses

See the beauty of the earth, starting with birth. Hear the roar of thunders voice, a child rejoice. Touch creation, water and sand, a loved one’s hand. Smell the wind and salty seas, honey from bees. Taste fresh fruits and apple crisp, loves sweet kiss. Feel your neighbours from the start, with open heart. Sense others feelings before you begin, so all can win. 11.28.2014 Contest: Didactic 2nd

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/9/2014 11:44:00 AM

...and back with merited congratulations, Brenda!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2014 8:59:00 AM

And back wid huge congrats on ur superb write n a super win!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/8/2014 9:34:00 PM

Congrats, Brenda, on a wonderful win with these great words of wisdom! Yes, if we were all more sensitive to others, the world would be a kinder place!! Hugs, Rhonda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/8/2014 8:24:00 PM

Nicely done poem, congrats on the win

Joseph May

Date: 12/8/2014 5:18:00 PM

Lovely write Brenda....congrats n your win

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/8/2014 2:37:00 PM

The Oracle has spoken,the crown is won;congrats on the win Brenda...huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Kayod5

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/8/2014 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/8/2014 11:06:00 AM

Very creative attack to this challenge!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Maurice.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/8/2014 10:16:00 AM

The simplicity of such truths, is what moves me the most !! Lovely poem, Brenda !!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Carrie.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/8/2014 9:45:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for entering and May God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:15:00 PM

Thanks so much Regina.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/8/2014 9:37:00 AM

Hi Brenda, I enjoyed your lovely poem about our wonderful senses and how we can use them to appreciate life. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, 7+Fav, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2014 7:54:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:14:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/8/2014 2:34:00 AM

Great placement for a great poem. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:13:00 PM

Thanks Rob.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2014 5:29:00 AM

Very good use of the human's senses..God is good to bless us with all of these isn't he..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/4/2014 7:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 4:27:00 PM

you touched all the sense here Brenda - outstanding write good luck:-) hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 7:04:00 PM

Thank you Jan. My trusty friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/29/2014 2:02:00 PM

A very valuable lesson here loaded with deep knowledge that springs from a loving hear and a mind full of appreciation for life, dear Brenda! A seven , a must!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 7:04:00 PM

Thank you so very much Demetrios