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Serenade

Like the first dawning dew drops Like the fresh scents of morning Like cut grasses in spring time Like a flower in new bloom Your beauty enfolds me Engulfs and abounds me Completely unveils me Makes my heart cry for more Like the depths of your valleys Like the gushing of geysers (hot springs) Like the turn of the ocean Trickling streams down the mountains Like the mists upon Snowdon Gently rise Gently fall Guess not often I tell you Just how much you mean to me That my life would be worthless Without you to adore Yes, I'm saying I love you And I hope you are listening For it seems like a lifetime To speak out surface and soar Like the eagle flies on wing Like the clouds in the Heavens Like trees rustle above My life trembles with passion Let me show my adoration My courtship and fondness My sweetest amore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/15/2013 2:26:00 PM
Hey, your first post here and it's gushing romance like the gushing of nature depicted herein! It very much has the feel of a serenade.
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Date: 5/24/2009 6:53:00 AM
YAY! Warmest congrats sweet friend on your most beautiful and well deserved win in John's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/24/2009 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest. Anna-Marie Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/21/2009 9:11:00 AM
Oh, this is very nicely done. I like how you've woven a rhyme into the last 3 stanzas, and the sentiment is wonderful.
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Date: 4/21/2009 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations Anna-Marie on this wonderful profession of love being featured. If this person doesn't come running you better check quickly, they may be comatose. What a great heartfelt write. Vince
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Date: 4/21/2009 6:38:00 AM
I appreciate the progression running through this poem, Anna-Marie, the meter flows wonderfully. Sounds embue this one with so much auditory imagery, it's easy to see why this one's featured this week! Congrats on a meaningful write! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:55:00 PM
Anna-Marie, Congrats on having your poem featured!
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:32:00 PM
Anna-Marie, congratulations on your featured poem. Your" Serenade " brings my memory back when I was a young man, with my guitar and some freinds serenading a young lady. MIne is also featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/20/2009 3:00:00 PM
That is a beautiful love poem. Keep writing. God bless you. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week... Always, Dane
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Date: 4/20/2009 1:25:00 PM
Congradualtions my friend on being featuered....Rhonda Kay
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Date: 4/20/2009 10:23:00 AM
Warmest congrats sweet friend on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:28:00 AM
wow congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless from diane
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Date: 4/20/2009 5:43:00 AM
Congrats to you on your poem being featured this week, bravo Anna-Marie! Rgds, Ernesto
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:15:00 PM
Nice work and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:33:00 AM
Anna - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/4/2009 1:12:00 AM
...reminds me of the song 'Morning Has Broken.' Lovely imagery and the sweetest of sentiments. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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