Sequence of Events

Previously seen in Opium dreams, These scenes of Deja-Vu Future reference balance beams (The Present misconstrued) In retrospect, I do reflect, "Did I see the warning signs?" Time is met with sheer suspect As Life rewinds the past unkind

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Robin Davis

Date: 12/20/2013 8:56:00 AM

Chan The Man A short but meaningful and powerful write. The reader can see the hidden message and meaning in this. Great job my friend Hugs and Love Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Games We Play poem.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/20/2013 9:08:00 AM

I appreciate it so, Sweet Pea <3

Karen Anglesey

Date: 11/12/2013 9:34:00 AM

This is genius-ness. You're the poet master for sure :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/13/2013 4:55:00 AM

Pretty sure I am blushing and can feel my smile from ear to ear. Thanks, K. I think the last line is problematic, though <3 <3 <3