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September

The wind will wake up with the dawn Scattering leaves over the lawn The grass has grown The birds have flown But the rake continues to spawn!

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Date: 9/17/2022 6:59:00 AM
Such a grand month, and your grand limerick is befitting.
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Date: 9/17/2022 5:42:00 AM
Great use of personification, Rico. Janice
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Date: 9/16/2022 1:12:00 PM
Another good raking poem. Any bulls about. Ha, ha SuZ
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Date: 9/15/2022 12:39:00 PM
LOL, so true! Linda
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Date: 9/15/2022 12:20:00 PM
and here you are with the dawn, lyrics from...Billy Holiday! I use the word rake in my "One Mean Hombre" poem! A lovely September, I can feel it in my bones, Rico!
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Date: 9/14/2022 8:31:00 PM
This is lovely.... ! Beautififul rhyming with pleasant scenes from nature.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/15/2022 10:55:00 AM
An American rake is, "an unrestrained indulger" . . .Aloha!
Date: 9/14/2022 8:23:00 PM
Enjoyed and yes the birds are flying back south at this time. Just take a blower and blow those leaves on a windy day and they will fly away like the birds.lol love phyl
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Date: 9/14/2022 1:17:00 PM
ha! you are so clever, rico! thanks for the grin...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/15/2022 10:53:00 AM
YOU are the clever one! Thank you for your understanding! Aloha!
Date: 9/14/2022 11:15:00 AM
Like Sara I give the lawn a final cut and scoop up the leaves as well. Greetings from Wales, I'm on the move again. Tom
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/14/2022 11:22:00 AM
Cymru am byth! Aloha!
Date: 9/14/2022 11:11:00 AM
Good one. Just run over them with the lawnmower. Sara
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/14/2022 11:23:00 AM
Thanks for the laugh! ? Aloha!

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