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Sensual Awakening

Awakened by consuming desire-electrifying fusion, gently hugged, intensely jubilant! Knowing lips moisten, now our passion quickens - rising…surging…tensing…undone! Volcanic waves x-ray your zenith… 23 September 2015 Charlotte Puddifoot's Sensual ABCs Contest

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Date: 10/8/2015 2:14:00 AM
Yet another fantastic win Kim! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/6/2015 3:13:00 AM
With grear joy I add my congratulations, dear Kim! Brilliant ABC! A 7.
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Date: 10/4/2015 6:52:00 PM
Kim, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 10/3/2015 11:55:00 PM
Wow! Congrats on your smooth flow leading to a win!
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Date: 10/3/2015 7:22:00 PM
a well deserved win, Dearie. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/3/2015 6:07:00 PM
I could feel the tension building, Kim. Very nice.
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Date: 10/3/2015 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..... :-)
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Date: 10/3/2015 4:51:00 PM
Oh I really love this entry Kim. Your choice of words defines class! A favorite for me! Congratulations Kim, on a fine win! #7
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Date: 10/3/2015 4:37:00 PM
this is a very well written abc, perfectly coherent with strong use of language and an excellent last line; electrifying and intense it surely is! congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 10/4/2015 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Charlotte. It was a challenging contest. Thank you for my placement and the inspiration. :-)
Date: 10/3/2015 2:46:00 PM
Hi Kim, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/3/2015 2:17:00 PM
ohh la la lovely passionate write Kim congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:47:00 AM
You've nailed it again.This one speaks of pure sensual beauty.loved the ending.I've added you as my fav poet already.
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:15:00 PM
oooh la la la la la. It SINGS with passion. THis one has GOT to make the winners' list!!
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Date: 9/26/2015 4:25:00 PM
Pleasantly sensual...suggestive, without losing your grip on extreme intensity! Top marks for the content and apt handling of the situation:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:36:00 PM
Enticing sensuality at it's best! Great write Kim! Hugs
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Date: 9/26/2015 12:14:00 AM
Love through the senses, not through words, not through clever speech, just all by the sensations the mind blesses us with. Awesome write Kim! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/25/2015 1:56:00 AM
Love's lava smoothly settles in the heart's excited sea...a very potent climax of passion, written with feral style Kim...J.A.B.
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:11:00 PM
You have slotted each word in really well Kim without altering the flow - well done - Lindsay
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Date: 9/24/2015 7:13:00 PM
Such great sensuality expressed in your flowing ABC, Kim. Very nicely done! All the best in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/24/2015 3:08:00 PM
love the fire and heat, kim... volcanic, indeed!.. greeat job!..huggs
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Date: 9/24/2015 12:05:00 PM
Wonderful write, my dear. Enjoyed the build up to the climax. ;) Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:55:00 AM
Pure glorification of sensuality, dear Kim! Superb! A7! Good luck!
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Date: 9/24/2015 9:10:00 AM
Deep and very sensual... Quite impressive in its depth.. A7 Good luck in that contest..
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Date: 9/24/2015 4:16:00 AM
This is certainly sensual, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2015 12:28:00 AM
Really sensual poem with fabulous imagery. best of luck in the contest :)
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