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Self Actualization

Sweet sounds of every day enriching the life Empty dark lucky enough into your lights Life looks in the mirror at its crimson strife Feeling within how the stars getting bright As I walk in the garden looking for your window Curious to collect the crystals from your braid Towards a home in pomegranate that I know Unable if I am to make it, I’ll lose the cool shade An amazing struggle between two colored sparks Lovely corridors into the world of your red roses In the lightning and laughter that defy the dark Zeal absolute for the shaft of light that discloses An arrival at self designed patterns of joy in love The words aplenty to speak in a voice of poetry Intensely waiting inside the golden trophy cup Of tomorrow, your pleasant trellises look at me Nice construction and deconstruction, this life __________________________________________________ 11/11/2016 Self Actualization Double Acrostic Sponsor: San Woo 11/11/2016

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Date: 11/11/2016 11:59:00 PM
Wow impressive rhyme scheme and I adore the mention of pomegranates. I also find the word trellis very poetic. Kudos. Do pls comment my latest poem too.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/12/2016 2:53:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/11/2016 10:43:00 AM
such meaningful words that enrich the soul, probir!...huggs
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:47:00 AM
...and most of it rhymes. Just wonderfully thought out and expressed, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/11/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel for your kind appreciation ...
Date: 11/11/2016 2:41:00 AM
Thunderous writing my friend , Probir, with unsurpassed beauty! Good luck my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/11/2016 3:29:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words ...
Date: 11/11/2016 1:01:00 AM
Wow!!! Probir, you have done exceptionally well here. Good luck my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/11/2016 3:29:00 AM
Thank you so much ...

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