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Selene

Rispetto for Selene (What Makes the Moon Glow) Goddess Selene, her full face milky white, rises from the ocean, the Radiant One. A chariot she rides in the sky of night, while her thoughts are on her dear *Endymion. So he’d never die, this man, Selene’s love, must sleep forever, dreaming of her above. She comes and lies with him, but he doesn’t know the dream is real and their passion makes her glow! *In mythology, Endymion (en-dim-ee-uhn) was a very handsome shepherd who fathered 50 of the Goddess Moon's Children (all while in his sleep!!). Written by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's INTO THE MOOD OF IMAGERY Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/11/2012 12:29:00 AM
We don't have day light saving here.We have only one time zone in India.I am interested to know about it.Do you advance your clock time by some hour on a particular day?
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:44:00 PM
ANDREA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/1/2012 3:05:00 PM
congrats on your contest win andrea; this contest produced some very interesting mythological poems, and yours recounts the story very well :-)
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Date: 2/29/2012 6:13:00 PM
One heck of a good little soldier that man must have had and been hitting the local brew a bit too? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:17:00 PM
Hey Andrea...these mythological writes are great..I am not very strong at them but love learning about all of these wonderful tales. Congrats on a great win!! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/29/2012 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Into The Mood Of Imagery" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2012 3:52:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a wonderful win for this quality write on Goddess Selene..luv.. so amazing and descriptive tooooooo.....
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Date: 2/25/2012 11:48:00 AM
I just love this clever piece on Selene. I guess everyone said to Endymion, 'Yeah, in your dreams mate...'
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Date: 2/25/2012 8:01:00 AM
oh I am carried away on the chariot too reading glorious tribute to Selene.. good luck in Nette's contest Andrea and defimitely a top spot winning wonder for u luv..
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Date: 2/25/2012 6:31:00 AM
you certainly are 'Into the mood of imagery' here. good luck, enjoyed, harry
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Date: 2/23/2012 11:13:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea. I like it when good poetry also serves to educate me. Next time my wife complains -- I'll just tell her it's the Endymion in me. ;-) Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/23/2012 10:06:00 PM
that's a beautiful imaginary story poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you,Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/23/2012 5:42:00 PM
Great job . Sounds like a Winner
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Date: 2/23/2012 3:39:00 PM
Wake up Endy, it's time to go to work. The children are hungry and the coffee's on to perk. You slept right through the middle of the night. And now you need to go and make it right.
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:26:00 PM
Those mythology stories are something else aren't they..Enjoyed reading your work..Good topic and presentation..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck ..That was sad that he fathered so many children while asleep..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:20:00 PM
Very good approach to the contest theme Andrea.A creative write.This contest is going to be tough for me.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 2/23/2012 10:14:00 AM
Lazy Endymion, least he could do was be awake for the action! :) Ssorry Andrea, couldn't help that ! Truthfully, you have such lovely images of the moon in this and I wish you well in the contest! Hugs to you.
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Date: 2/23/2012 8:35:00 AM
A beauty on this poem Andrea. Thanks for the heads up on trees and it was Judy who did the poem. A wonderful poem too. Man I am so behind on reading and commenting. Today is my last day so will have more time next week. love phyl
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:42:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Sounds like a Winner to me, Superb Rispetto, I may try doing one I have not Written one since Dr. Ram's Contest LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry Soup Mail Call
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:15:00 AM
What a lovely love relationship, that will never die.Forever love in a dream.Godd luck to you Andrea in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:16:00 AM
sorry - GOOD LUCK!!!!
Date: 2/23/2012 12:15:00 AM
What a guy !! like it must look this up, Thanks for your comment and i had one on my bum once, whooo it did smart xx
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:30:00 PM
One of my favorite writers is named Celine!~ Good view of Mythology. Long Time no see Andrea! Thanks for keepin on with reading my stuff...You know I may be AWOL from the soup but I always come back to the MMMMM mmmm... Good!
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:43:00 PM
ANDREA, I WISH I KNEW WHAT THIS CONTEST WAS ABOUT.. OR WHO SHE IS... YOUR POEM IS VERY LOVELY... good luck in the contest.... and yes...i've been here for almost 3 hours..lol.. but,, i'm leaving now... i enjoyed this contest... it allows me to read a few poems i missed.... ta ta for now...
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:28:00 PM
I must say, this poem is a great one from you! I love how you approached the contest, especially since your went with a rispetto, very clever! I think your poem approached the subject with relative ease, at least I read into the write with ease! I enjoyed your poem completely this evening Andrea! You did awesome with this poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:08:00 PM
I agree with everything Leo says just below.
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