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Below is the poem entitled Seasons which was written by poet Debbie Duncan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Poetry is like a river
Always changing currents
Soft, wild, always demanding attention. 

October sun fading  
Blowing thru golden hair
Wind swept streaks on face.

Never a green leaf whispers
As the sweet smelling flowers drift
Deep into the heart of summer.

I saw spring today
Was an awesome sight
Heaven was open to me.

3/ 5/ 2013 Tues

Copyright © Debbie Duncan

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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 8:26:00 AM
    Awesome! So Awesome... Poems like this make me wonder if this site will increase the ratings to 10.

  1. Date: 6/25/2014 4:41:00 PM
    this is really beautiful : )

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 10:57:00 PM
    Nice - a couple of them are really haikus since they are about nature. Good use of this Asian form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 5:25:00 PM
    Enjoyed this uplifting piece Debbie thanks for the visit..'

  1. Date: 3/29/2014 4:30:00 PM
    This is a great poem Debbie. I am so glad that spring is here. Thanks and enjoy the season... Lucilla

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2014 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lucilla , spring is around the corner :)
  1. Date: 3/5/2014 10:33:00 PM
    a wonderful flowing poem.... Beautiful Debbie..... SKAT

  1. Date: 2/16/2014 8:54:00 AM
    Sounds like your on a tributary journey having read Dukes comment. Hope all is going well and that you find some time to enjoy a write or two. We await the breeze to blow your golden hues our way again. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 9:29:00 PM
    Hi, sweetie, I sure hope you will back here in full force soon with lots of new poems.

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 3:03:00 PM
    Nice way to describe spring. I can't wait for it; especially after the snow storm we received yesterday.

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:40:00 PM
    this is beautiful

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:26:00 PM
    Good luck on your training and doing. You have the sensitivity and empathy to be a wonderful counselor. And yes, it is hard to write a lot when we are busy with other parts of our lives. I wish you the best in this endeavor. You will make the world a better place.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 2:49:00 AM
    Wow this is beautiful. love the bit about the hai streaks and nature. very well done. A real pleasure to read. Pete.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 6:43:00 PM
    They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder, well you've beheld beauty and written about it thus i loved your write here lady, thank you for your wonderful comment on my queen mary she was and always will be a lady to all that have seen her majesty ship. cheri

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 5:28:00 PM
    Beautiful Debbie. A simply beautiful Senryu.

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 10:44:00 PM
    You haven't posted in a while. Refreshing poem! Hope everything is okay ")

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 4:07:00 PM
    Poetry just comes and when it starts to flow, I never know just what will come out. As you say it is like the seasons. I loved your beautiful words, my friend...peter

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 1:45:00 PM
    love these senryu. my friend

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/1/2014 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jack , Happy New Year to you :)
  1. Date: 1/1/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Debbie, I guess spring will always be in your heart! I apologize for being away for a while. I can't explain my absence except to say that I have been consumed with outside matters and have neglected my poetic partition. It is funny how that works. Best of experiences going forward to you.

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 8:03:00 PM
    Poetry is an ever changing river depending on our moods. Well said in this poem. Wishing you a very Happy New Years. I hope to have more time on here in the coming new year. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Hello Debbie, It is always a wonderful time when I visit an read your poetry. I also have a poem called Seasons. And that is what drew my attention to this beautiful poem...Hugs...Roger