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My being is a mirror of the cold. Flows through me, like wind and mold. Flakes that can fly, bite, and hold. The beauty of clear winter evenings unfolded. Snowfall is enhanced by the trees exposed.  When lakes freeze, the kids shift to rink mode. We omit each item from the scold. However, we do not know what winter will hold. This is the real springtime prize foretold
Written: December 03, 2022

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Date: 12/4/2022 8:02:00 AM
Celebration of monorhyme, my friend, Lasaad! Impressive writing. Blessings!
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Date: 12/4/2022 5:31:00 AM
The beauty of clear winter evenings--well said my friend.
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Date: 12/3/2022 9:06:00 PM
A lovely rhyming poem on winter and the changes it brings on nature and in the self.
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