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Searching For Snow White

Splashing through muddy puddles high atop his majestic horse looking for his Snow White his happily ever after his baby blue eyes misted No longer is she in her castle No longer there to surrender to his affection she is hidden hidden amongst the forest silenced by a spell how they both long for love a love to carry their dreams dreams of being free free to love, express themselves free to frolic among the enchanted free to finally be able to open up His heart beats stronger every day he looks a life unfortunate circumstances took trying to fill the void left by her absence but determined never to give up hope for she is the one together they will ride off into the sunset

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Date: 11/11/2015 6:37:00 PM
Tim your loving side shines in this wonderful write. Wonderful write my friend.
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:14:00 AM
If I were a woman......... You have the magic touch, having just come back from visiting castles and magical gardens, well this poem almost sums up my trip! except I didn't meet any snow-whites :(
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Date: 11/6/2015 3:36:00 PM
You've got me sighing again... Sigh... True love... It obviously comes directly from your soul...
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Date: 11/5/2015 3:46:00 PM
Yes, and Snow White is searching for her prince. The thing fairy tales are made of, Tim. Nice one.
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:50:00 AM
One time or another, we have galloped, on our hope's horse, over valleys in search of our Snow White. Many times we thought we found her but as many was proved an illusion but still we went on and on till, some of us, after many trials and errors we did find HER! Excellent my friend, Tim!
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Date: 11/5/2015 6:52:00 AM
I'm sure your kids love this one Tim. Bravo!
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Date: 11/5/2015 2:00:00 AM
unique take on the subject... now i'm imagining how this will end, tim... nice one!..huggs
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:17:00 AM
love this one Tim, enoyed ~Luv Linda
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Date: 11/4/2015 4:38:00 PM
Another good one Tim....
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