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You are the crimson surge I am your crimson desire The bird radiates a crimson urge Comes about the sapphire You vivify the respirations I deeply breathe your mist Following the crimson inhalations Comes about the crimson twist Thank God that I got the life And enjoy the crimson strife ___________________________________ July 26, 2016

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Date: 10/8/2016 6:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Probir. Gorgeous symmetry of thought and desire, of self-awareness to freely yield to love and the consequences thereof. Very poignant read. My first one of you impressive catalog of poems. I will now start to chip away at the wealth of knowledge you so gracious have freely given us. Ty also for reading my poem. Much love and peace to you, sir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/9/2016 12:03:00 AM
Thank you ... I will certainly read ...
Date: 7/31/2016 2:35:00 PM
Nice write. I like and enjoyed it!! Good luck.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/1/2016 12:21:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/28/2016 7:03:00 AM
Well written good luck for the contest x
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Date: 7/28/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/27/2016 12:04:00 AM
good write Probir, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/27/2016 5:43:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/26/2016 2:45:00 PM
- Really wonderful written, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/26/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/26/2016 12:53:00 PM
Wat a thought:)good luck
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/26/2016 7:54:00 PM
We are as we think ... thank you so much ...
Date: 7/26/2016 12:25:00 PM
You captured the red.....Good luck in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/26/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thank you Janis ..
Date: 7/26/2016 10:30:00 AM
Red passion, love desire so much to life.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/26/2016 11:55:00 AM
Yes ... in poetry ... sometimes in life too of course .... thank you ....
Date: 7/26/2016 7:26:00 AM
A very lovely poem, though I've noticed quite a number of poems that use the rhyme of "life" and "strife" together.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/26/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thank you ... rhyming life with strife is very common ....
Date: 7/26/2016 5:27:00 AM
Enjoyed the write very much, good luck in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/26/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/26/2016 3:06:00 AM
Ah how delightfully... crimson my friend Probir! A seven.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/26/2016 4:52:00 AM
Thank you ... Regards ...

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