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What can I call it the act of yours what word do you want from me to express my mind but you already know! my mouth can lie and my eyes can pretend but my heart says the truth Where is the you that I know at first you boycott? for what? it hurts.

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Date: 7/26/2017 6:00:00 PM
Such great emotion! It reminds me of all the tiimes I've been hurt or hurt someone else. Excellent stuff!
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Date: 7/26/2017 10:43:00 AM
What can I say, Afolabi! Lies and excuses will lead us nowhere; better to come out with the truth and lay our cards on the table! Truth could hurt, but lies hurt even more. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/23/2017 7:28:00 PM
I enjoyed your free verse poem on how much one's heart can be hurt by another's action.
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Date: 7/23/2017 9:26:00 AM
Silence can indeed hurt!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2017 9:26:00 AM
Also, thanks for your visit.
Date: 7/22/2017 2:06:00 PM
- Yes, painful ... well written, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/23/2017 4:57:00 AM
thanks for taking your time to comment. your impact is greatly appreciated.
Date: 7/22/2017 1:43:00 PM
Dynamic, straight and true writing dear friend, Afolabi! Good to see you again!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/23/2017 4:46:00 AM
thank you very much sir, i do write but i just don't find time to post it. through not often. but now i am back.
Date: 7/22/2017 12:14:00 PM
Stark painful and honest write!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/23/2017 4:42:00 AM
that's friend

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