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Savage Peril: Ode To Our Earth

Torn from our roots The chaos ensues. Broken from family, The surface unravels. From this revealed, A new life emerges. See the next forms To sustain a new life. Make art from chaos. This is your life.

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John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 6:43:00 AM

Janis - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/12/2008 4:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/11/2008 8:37:00 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/4/2008 11:18:00 PM

Janis - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/30/2008 4:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Janis. Love, Carol

Date: 7/29/2008 1:47:00 PM

Much to think about here. I really like the last stanza. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing your continued success with your writing. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/28/2008 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations Janis, on your featured write. A look at life as things change. Vince

Michael Romero

Date: 7/28/2008 6:33:00 AM

short and to the point why whine whenif you look hard enough you will find,keep on writing on

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/28/2008 6:08:00 AM

Congratulations Janis on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/28/2008 6:04:00 AM

I loved the ending of this poem for often this is what we do - very insightful - blessings and congrats on being featured