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SandCastle of dreams

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SandCastle of dreams


********relaxing medicine****

My dreams of the sand
Underneath the ocean stars
Sleeping with the wind

********the beast dreams*******

Mr. Sandman's bag
Romantic, like pouring rain
Seashore wedding bash

********the world is home******

Wishing well mirage
Homeless with rich sandcastle
Ocean wave  pillow

********it takes two***********

Heaven passion kiss
4 hands creating a mote
Drawbridge of sea shells

*******hungry wings***********

First class bay front seat
Seagulls land on top tower
Essence of bird spill

*******colliding sandcastle******

Adventure hot day
Knocking the beauty of my moment
Stinky, little brother


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  1. Date: 1/20/2015 1:04:00 AM
    Could experience the feel of beach... beautiful write...

  1. Date: 10/24/2014 4:48:00 PM
    This was cool to read, like I was on the sand right there with you, and what a way to end the moment, hope he helps build sandcastles next time ;)

  1. Date: 4/18/2014 8:48:00 PM
    Enjoyed this...could see the sun and the hot sand.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 2:41:00 PM
    † Smile, Enchanting Save The Ending Which Made Me Laugh *:* Waddling Past Timeless Portraits Through Endless Corridores Poo Poo Trails His Tiny Baby *.* Climbing A Stool Into Her Window Well Gazing Beyound The Glass *) Sparkling Twinkling Eyes At All The Beauty, They Find *:*(* A Kiss As Dreams Innocent Fingers Tracing Love's Sash.... MERRY CHRISTMAS ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:53:00 PM
    SKAT These are some creative and unique little poems. The imagery is superb and imaginative. I tried a Haiku once but couldn't do it. I am a rhymer. LOL nice job

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 4:50:00 PM
    It is a sad thing when our dreams have to get ruined by others. All we can do is watch as they crumble down around us like a falling sandcastle. But, we can always build a new one! Excellent poem, SKAT, I really enjoyed it!...Thank you for the kind comments, as always! :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Hi my friend, Haiku's, i love them. Tried one once, never again. I loved these. Anything to do with the sea or surroundings fills me with ease. Words that flow like the sea. Your Haiku's touched me with peace. Catch you later. Have a nice day. Your friend...MIKE.

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:56:00 AM
    A sweet picture of wonderful dream of childhood days adorned with golden words. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:48:00 AM
    This is an exquisite poem my dearest Skat! Soo love it & sooo enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:45:00 PM
    This is fantastic. I love the ocean and I enjoyed this! ~Mel

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 9:06:00 PM
    Interesting write!

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 4:21:00 AM
    i loved this!!!! no wonder you won

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:17:00 AM
    Hi SKAT! Enjoyed the reado of each of your Haikus! And thank you for your congrats on my Haiku-win. Have a great day!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:53:00 AM
    Skat, you are a superb haiku writer, I love all of these, so so beautiful, amazing images, you bring me sand and sea, waves and serenity.

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 10:52:00 AM
    Enjoyed this series of poems~I wanted to let you know I am very pleazzzed with my placement in your "Hot Air Balloon Contest" Yippy Skip~So glad you found it "A Keeper" Take care girl !!!!Much Love~Rick

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 10:53:00 AM
    a great group of thoughts and images!

  1. Date: 12/31/2010 6:01:00 PM
    Happy New year Skat...lovely short poems! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 8:58:00 AM
    Fantastic group of Haiku's and how do you think of so many when I sit and think about doing one. Awesome. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 12:37:00 PM
    Nice group of Haiku's ~ Thank you for my win in your Halloween contest LOL~Cool !!!~God bless you!!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 12:10:00 PM
    Nice work. I really like the one about the seagulls. Good luck n the contest.