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Safe Haven

The clouds wept that bleak stormy Wednesday The stream in the farm land ghyll overflowed. Shrouded within the moorland mist The water rose then rose and rose Yet with renewed hope and speculation Wee lads waded where ‘Turner Lane’ once was. Beyond the boundary stone wall The patter of many voices Laughing in the face of the fierce wind After all ‘Jack Steel’s Red Barn was there. Hay bales still warm and snug From the urchins body Gave shelter to the wearisome Those of us threaten by the rain. © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Date: 11/14/2012 1:02:00 AM
Love this and I see it won in a comp, I am not surprised xx soup
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Date: 12/13/2010 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Harry in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:21:00 AM
Cracking poetry Harry, more than deserves it's place on the winners podium >> James :)
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:07:00 PM
lovely poem, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:13:00 PM
What a nice story of the homeland. Congratulations on your much deserved recognition. RAY
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:37:00 PM
Ahh, the barn as a warm haven from a storm. This is awesome, Harry congratulations on this winning poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2010 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on a beautiful image of the old red barn. Beautiful imagery. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:27:00 AM
Hmmm another great imagery. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congrats Harry on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. a super expression for the contest luv.. enjoy another sweet victory ...
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserv ed third place win in the contetst, harry
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your high placement in Rick's contest, Harry! Bravo! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2010 5:59:00 AM
a haven can seem like heaven sometimes. nicely writen. john
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Date: 11/3/2010 12:28:00 PM
Luv your entry Harry .. good luck my friend as this one reads like a grand winner ... enjoyed your creativity today from your talented pen..luv..
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Date: 11/1/2010 12:40:00 PM
Oh, I love this one, Harry. The old red barn still provides shelter to those in need. Too many of these barns are just reminders of the past, but this one offers people refuge from the elements, perhaps providing some hope for the future. Well done, my friend! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2010 2:45:00 AM
food for the soul, harry-- just awesome! thanks for leaving a nice comment on my page.. warmest, nette
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Date: 10/28/2010 7:45:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem on this cold , snow filled day. Your poem sounds warmer than the weather here. Soup mail God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:40:00 AM
A rest in the hay for the wet and weary! Nice barn tale. I love the anticipation...laughter of wee small voices...reminds me of a "haunted house" we once passed...during childhood! Adventure! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:04:00 PM
A fine entry for Rick's "Red Barn Contest", Harry. How have you been? Love the imagery. ....audrey
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:34:00 AM
nice story , very much enjoyed this morning
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:42:00 AM
Interesting and thought provoking write on to create a safe haven, harry
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:21:00 AM
enjoyed the tone and vivid imagery of this piece.. all the bet=st! warmest, nette
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