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Running Through a Childish Age

Let us set off through the gates with pace, Running at fields like joyous kids; Then returning, telling lies to parents About how lost we were in a world lost of trace Or route to send us back. We carried on and found the track Open up our arms, busy with touch and embrace. We didn't speak how much we fell to love that night, Sitting down to tea that evening, Our parents faces fill with blank disbelieving As we chuckled and choked upon our food. Ah, the delight In knowing the secret we kept from their world Started a grieving for kids they new once as themselves. It was that we knew when being excused, How they had grown up too that evening, breathing With time, gone old to age And in amongst all the childish lies, Began a gradual leaving.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/17/2008 12:23:00 PM
Congrats Louis on making it throught the first round. Good Luck in the finals. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/30/2008 7:49:00 AM
Louis - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/17/2008 8:49:00 AM
Louis - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/13/2008 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:20:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 1:17:00 PM
Great poem. Congratulations Louis on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 11:37:00 AM
So much truth in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/25/2008 10:30:00 AM
Congratulatins on a well written clever write! Laura :)
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Date: 8/25/2008 6:40:00 AM
Gotta enjoy every freakin' moment. It goes by much much too fast. Congratulations on a well deserved feature. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2008 8:59:00 PM
Amazing how fast it all comes and goes - congrats on being featured
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