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Roses Aspirate

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Roses Aspirate

Roses aspirate.
In your absence, their presence.
When breathless, inspire.

*The is a rewrite of another haiku (Roses), for Charles Henderson's "The Natural Thing to Do" contest.

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  1. Date: 6/19/2010 6:46:00 PM
    Very nice Haiku! Much feeling evoked through your words. Good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments on my poem; By the Light of the Moon". I'm grateful you read on... Caroline.

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 11:11:00 PM
    VEry nice, Scott! Let me see a few more of your haiku.

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 4:11:00 PM
    Really well done, all the best in the contest and thanks for uplaoding. Gavin.

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 10:49:00 PM
    Thank you for supporting my contest.-Charles

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 9:07:00 PM
    A wonderful haiku nice images. Good luck in the contest, Scott

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 8:43:00 PM
    Interesting perspective. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen