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Room Disorder

Whose room is this Crispy reek therein Whose room is this His under-wear dangling Upon the ceiling fan switch His clothes spread upon the couch His pant hung upon the door His books spread upon the floor Whose room is this His shoes upon TV set Whose room is this A stack of dingy plates upon radio set His wedge upon ceiling fan His towel hung upon stand fan Cream, face powder ect. in the shoe rack Anoush, Abdlemalik, Clack Uh! Ha... It looks like mine So much dis order within room of mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/21/2015 1:35:00 PM
LOL. Glad that Reps make occasional checks in Collage Dorms - Youths. Enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 8/25/2015 8:00:00 PM
OH my, Such disorder this is. Kind of like me in my college days. hahaha. I sure enjoyed reading this one!
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Date: 8/25/2015 3:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this humorous write, Afolabi. At least those pants will stop the door from banging:) I think this might be suitable for Casarah's contest! // paul
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Date: 8/25/2015 2:11:00 PM
- Sounds like a long summer vacation ..... lol - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:27:00 AM
It reminds me of my university days! A good one dear A.M.
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Date: 8/24/2015 5:20:00 PM
Everything is right where you want it...lol
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Date: 8/24/2015 4:34:00 PM
Ha! Ha! I enjoyed this humorous write, Afolabi! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/24/2015 3:30:00 PM
Cute one..Reads like it matches my grandson's room when he comes home and it takes me a week to get it clean when he leaves..Line six His cloth maybe should be His clothes?? Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/24/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for your dropped by to read and comment to my page and also thanks for corrected me on that. Stay blessed..............A.M.

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