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A snow bound silence descends now upon my hallowed home, the traffic's gone, the streets unplowed and I'm engrossed in tomes. A ribald tale of myst'ry roils the knights have charged the breech the bard sings tall tales of old of maiden's love's unleashed. The pendants mark the battles course as Saxons face the Celts unarmored men fought Saxon's, Norse in naught but paint and pelts. And so it was, and so it is as men live or die for a kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/7/2012 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Brian Strand 's "Whatever Again" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:01:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent write. Nice going. Great Job. Enjoyed. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/6/2012 6:18:00 AM
I don't like this ending SO if anyone has suggestions??
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:17:00 PM
congrats Debbie on HM .. we had a few inches of snow in Rome but nothing like Denver.. will be gone by Monday.. mesmerizing lines luv..
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. Very nice entry
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:44:00 PM
Congrats, Debbie! This is a lovely sonnet. I wanted to thank you again for your comments re: my haiku. I am working on sitinguishing between senryu and haiku. Blessings, Rhonda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/5/2012 8:44:00 PM
*distinguishing
Date: 2/5/2012 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place, Debbie. Luv, Maureen
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:43:00 AM
Soup mail is not working.Do u want the same point changed as you told or should I post another one from my archive........kash PS:I am afraid I will not get the sufficient time to change it.
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Date: 1/24/2012 6:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Debbie. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2012 1:32:00 AM
Thanks Debbie, for the info..) the poem i forgot the knots shows as 10 syll per line until the last line which reads as far as i can tell 9...syll its the best i can do so far,, and i'm not sure how i will go in critique..? on others i am more into positive input..)
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Date: 1/21/2012 10:53:00 PM
Dear Debbie, don't think i have let you down...I just have to read more.. toooo find out what is a meter poem.. or what makes a poem metered out.. you see you don't understand me.. i'm gonna go over this one for ideas..okay..thank you for sharing..forever & ever~pd
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:57:00 PM
in 1 iambic LINE..LINE! sorry
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:09:00 PM
Sooo.. its o k to have tetrameter & trimeter in the same work.. i was going to raise this issue..) but you have beaten me to it Debbie also i have sent you soup mail" and i like the engrossed in tomes line..) in the above scribe..!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/21/2012 5:56:00 PM
see those 2 complicated words [trimeter 3/ tetrameter 4] they are only indicators of how iambic feet are in a line 1 iambic foot is 1 grouping of [unstress STRESS] which literarily means 2 syllables line 1 [a SNOW]

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