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Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name:    epic.......
Placement: 1st
© 08-05-2012 All rights reserved
© 07-18-2013 All rights reserved
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rolled Durham smoke

rolled Durham smoke

It stayed with me, my bequest's constrain;
the ghostly harbor - my sixth sense,
I knew the mowing death sequence,
- this notion haunted me again.

Had sent the mail - my filed advice -
the ghosts of gunmen who have died,
upon the moors they stood with pride,
- the Rider asked his deathly price.

In air he thumped, his rhythmic waves;
demanding cruel his death tolls;
in town the women wore black stoles,
the 'killed in duel' dwell in graves;

The Rider hummed - our vessel moored
inside this port on Nueces' edge,
much red was shed on cypress sedge
- my instincts sharpened and inured.

Tall stood he on the wharf - I knew
the wind whipped ropes upon the mast,
- we drew the guns; he lifted fast;
my two guns bucked debt-law to ensue.

I felt the slug - he moved across,
already a ghost, on moors he stood;
I tasted blood - got up - I should,
with red drops staining grass and moss.

( I saw her standing on the field
amid red poppies and tall trees,
her thought became my holy shield,
bestowed, thenceforth, her grace in breeze.

She spread her arms and called me eft,
above the clouds to Astral Halls
athwart stood gunman - fast and deft
in Tombstone, Mobile and Sioux Falls.)

I rolled and lit a Durham smoke
with children watching me round-eyed;
that March, (I thought), a gunman died,
I heard bells' knell and two crows croak.

©  07-18-2013?3 G. Venetopoulos, All rights reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

(I do not smoke)

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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Your skill is unmatched. Captivating like Poe and commands attention like Shakespeare. Congratulations on your well deserved win :)

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:47:00 PM
    Fantastic and congratulations on your first place Win. Way to go , G. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:16:00 PM
    extremely the best epic In this contest..... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:41:00 AM
    Wow........this indeed is epic of old verse and mysterious........such a tale of depth !! Congratulations to you!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Hello G. V., Congratulations, thank you for the epic look, i felt as if the smoke told the tale. thank you for giving my contest a try... always~ LINDA

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    Date: 7/25/2013 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the honor. :) G.
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:52:00 PM
    you have a complex, sensitive mind, G....haunting in its existential approach; just mystical!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 3:02:00 PM
    This is all so mysterious, I think you were born to write G, what could I say, I couldn't write like this if my life depended on it, I like xxx

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 12:47:00 PM
    brilliant Giorgio its a winner for me gl in contest

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Man oh man...I was captured....Wyatt Earp and Matt..Dillon rolled into one and better....loved it

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:46:00 AM
    Hi G., I will save it and read it and maybe peek again later...he he.. I am smiling at the thought, I haven't moved away from your soup mail... and kazapppp. I got another mail from you. then I move on over to your contest page. I read your cast away, like I said, I found myself lost on you....xox..pd