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River of Dreams

River of dreams In the mind palace, flows constant calm and serene, the river of dreams. Written Feb 18th, 2016 For contest " Monoku or three liner" Sponsor - PD

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Sandra Adams

Date: 2/20/2016 11:16:00 AM

this river flows with much beauty...i like this one....good luck in the contest! :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/19/2016 9:43:00 PM

Tranquil, Upma. I like to think of that mind palace as potential poetry waiting to be discovered ... Liked where you went with this idea!

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/19/2016 2:34:00 PM

Very pretty lines, Dr. Upma! Enjoyed this :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/19/2016 1:29:00 AM

Yes, in mind's palace it should! Superb Monoku, dearest Dr. Upma! Good luck!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2016 6:28:00 PM

this is super nice, Upma. One of your best monoku I think I ever saw.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/18/2016 12:32:00 PM

Very soothing Dr Upma. May you always be at peace:) Good luck in contest

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 2/18/2016 10:20:00 AM

Lovely .......gl

Joseph May

Date: 2/18/2016 7:12:00 AM

Beautiful monoku Dr Upma