River

tiny wavelets sang sonorous songs in delight - dozing river woke Second Place in Haiku Or Senyru Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

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Pratap Roy

Date: 10/31/2021 7:48:00 PM

Congratulation.... Nicely written; Liked it. God bless you.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/11/2020 8:58:00 PM

Pleasant haiku. I am charmed. Picture is too nice. Congrats to win.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 10:15:00 PM

Thank you Anisha for your delightful words of appreciation.. Have a great day...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/10/2020 6:00:00 AM

Such a lovely haiku, Jenish! Janice

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 10:14:00 PM

Thank you Janice..

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/2/2020 5:04:00 AM

Charming. Congrats on your win, Jenish ~

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/4/2020 10:21:00 PM

Thank you Line...

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/30/2020 5:22:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/30/2020 9:39:00 PM

Thank you Kai..

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 4:53:00 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write and I love your image too _Constance

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/29/2020 8:54:00 PM

Thank you Constance for the contest and your support..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 12:06:00 PM

This is a fave for me Jenish! Every line is delightful and soothing. Congratulations on your win! :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 9:39:00 PM

Thank you Aditi..You made my day..

Patri Venkata Ramana

Date: 7/28/2020 3:10:00 AM

dozing river woke....Wonderful haiku. Congrats.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 3:32:00 AM

Thank you Patri.. Have a great day..

Paul Callus

Date: 7/27/2020 12:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Jenish! Imagery and personification are worthy of mention. Regards // paul

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 9:35:00 PM

Thank you Paul for your delightful comment.. Have a great day...

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/27/2020 3:16:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, Jenish:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 3:54:00 AM

Thank you Edward for your kind support..

V. Deepa

Date: 7/27/2020 1:10:00 AM

Dozing river woke:-) such a cute imagery jenish sir..Loved the displayed picture too. Congratulations on your wonderful win:-)keep inspiring.Warmest regards to you.:-)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 1:42:00 AM

Thank you Deepa for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2020 7:34:00 PM

this is precious. I really like the little story in this , Jenish! Congrats.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:29:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your support..

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2020 4:08:00 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:29:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2020 3:57:00 PM

such delightful imagery Jenish, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:28:00 PM

Thank you Jan...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2020 11:13:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:28:00 PM

Thank you Anne..

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/23/2020 7:43:00 AM

Love this, a picture of words.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:04:00 AM

Thank you Harry for your support...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/23/2020 6:12:00 AM

Oh, this is good!! From the incredible photo to each and every word of your richly tapestried haiku! A winner for sure, Jenish! Best wishes, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Gershon for your support.. Have a great day..

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/23/2020 6:04:00 AM

Beautiful Jenish :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Heidi..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/23/2020 6:00:00 AM

Dearest, Jenish, although I commented on your superb Haiku which I have Favored , my comment doesn't appear here. Therefore I favored it again. Hope this time it will show up.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your support.. Have a great day..