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Rising Within Your Pages

I take for granted all that I can do Thinking that what I have has all been earned Instead I should be so thankful to You A spirit of pride is one that is learned I start to believe the things that are said Thinking that what I have has all been earned Within my heart I begin to be led Rising within the pages of Your Word I start to believe the things that are said I learn to fly on the wings of a bird Here is where I learn the ways of Freedom Rising within the pages of Your Word I no longer doubt your Kingdom will come Without your Love I will never know Peace Here is where I learn the ways of Freedom Within the Heavens praises never cease Without Your Love I will never know Peace I take for granted all that I can do Instead I should be so thankful to you Any poem #4 Contest. Sponsored by Nathan A. Written March 7th 2014

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/26/2017 4:34:00 AM

:) One of your endearing qualities is your faith, Richard. It always reminds me of what really matters. Thank you. I'm so glad you visited an older write. You were the only one to do that when I was away on a consistent basis. I know life keeps us busy, but this gesture of yours today brought me joy. Hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/26/2017 9:14:00 AM

I'm glad to bring you some measure of joy Eileen. ;0) a big hug back to you.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/26/2016 2:50:00 PM

Exquisitely beautiful poem, Richard. As a Christian, I was deeply moved by your inspired words of faith. They help to strengthen me. Ty for that. Much love to you, fellow servant of Jesus Christ. RW

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2014 5:33:00 PM

Great testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 9:11:00 AM

Thanks Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/25/2014 11:12:00 PM

A very inspiring and uplifting poem of faith. A really great write, Richard! Congratulations on your win, as well!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/26/2014 9:59:00 AM

Thanks Kelly.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/20/2014 5:58:00 PM

Wonderful and beautiful write,Richard...Congrats on your win...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2014 8:26:00 AM

Thanks so much

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 1:31:00 AM

Richard, Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2014 8:26:00 AM

Thanks SKAT?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 11:45:00 PM

Richard:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2014 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Michael Dom

Date: 3/14/2014 7:27:00 AM

Strong of faith: you are a tower for others.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2014 8:58:00 AM

You are kind. Thanks Michael.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/11/2014 8:54:00 PM

'Thy kingdom come, thy will be done on earth as it is in heaven'...He taught us how to pray and if I could ever learn to repeat that same prayer with my very heart and soul, then I would truly be redeemed by the blood of the Lamb...Great testimony my friend - Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2014 9:04:00 AM

Thanks Tim, we are all in need of redemption.

Donna Jones

Date: 3/9/2014 11:22:00 PM

A great testimony and poem Richard ...God bless..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2014 9:02:00 AM

Thanks Donna.

David Williams

Date: 3/9/2014 11:03:00 AM

Richard this is excellent and should do very well, thank you for your suggestion, I like it and have changed it, I might have scored higher with that line ha ha ha....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2014 9:02:00 AM

Thanks David.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/9/2014 10:40:00 AM

A book within a book! Stellar, chuck

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2014 10:54:00 AM

Thanks Chuck.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/9/2014 5:19:00 AM

Faith in action with a pen! Your love for our Lord leaps from the page

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Monterey.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/9/2014 4:45:00 AM

Wisdom acquired within His embrace! Divine! A 7!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2014 9:02:00 AM

Thanks Demetrious, I appreciate the seven.

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/8/2014 4:16:00 PM

Beautiful praise to that which nourishes your soul Richard. Love should always support courage. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/8/2014 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Justin.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/8/2014 2:30:00 PM

super write Rick gl in contest hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/8/2014 3:16:00 PM

Thanks Shadow. I will take all the luck I can get. Hugs Rick.

Joseph May

Date: 3/8/2014 9:42:00 AM

A beautiful song of praise Richard...best wishes

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/8/2014 9:57:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, best wishes per day.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2014 11:22:00 PM

You are so good with this form of poetry, Richard. Glad to see this one tonight . Nathan loves forms like this one too and I am sure he will like this.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/8/2014 9:21:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I hope he likes it.

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/7/2014 7:05:00 PM

What can I say but an amazing poem, my West Coast friend! Cheers!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Jack, it is always nice to see your smiling face. God Bless.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/7/2014 3:07:00 PM

superb write Rick gl in contest hugs

Leon Wilson

Date: 3/7/2014 1:14:00 PM

Richard you are right we should be greatful of the things our saviour as given us with out him we have nothing may God continue to use you .Leon.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 1:15:00 PM

Thanks Leon, I appreciate your kind comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2014 12:24:00 PM

- Whatever ...win or not win .... this won my heart, Richard - Truly a amazing poem !!! - I wish you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 12:27:00 PM

I greatly appreciate my prize. I promise to be gentle with your heart.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/7/2014 11:14:00 AM

This poem gave me goosebumps Richard..It shows me how ungrateful to my creator I am,so many times.What I have,each breath that I take and hair that I own was given to me from above.Tnks for sharing this beauty and am favouring it: )

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 11:16:00 AM

Wow! Thanks, what an awesome comment! You make me smile once again.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/7/2014 11:09:00 AM

I can see why the Terzanelle is one of your favorite forms Richard. It seems that you have mastered it. This is a very splendid write. Kudos.....Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 11:13:00 AM

Thanks so much Tim.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2014 11:04:00 AM

We do take lots of things for granted in life; how many times we get servings on silver spoons. Let us take merit for what we strive for...and give merit to who it's due. So be it. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 11:12:00 AM

Amen brother.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 11:08:00 AM

Yes, I often confuse my silver spoon for wood.