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Below is the poem entitled RHYMEZONE which was written by poet Jaime Ferreyros. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I respect only poets
Who know how to rhyme
Warm, fuzzy writings
That read just like mine.
Other forms are too easy
Like spending a dime
Don’t bother to read them
They’re wasting my time.
For example the Beatniks
Ginsberg, Kerouac or Sinclair
Stoned out of their minds,
For them I don’t care.
It’s about velvet, lilies, the sun and the moon
Which inspire true poets 
To rhyme and to bloom.
So please let’s not argue
Which poet’s the best
I dream about verses,
The hell with the rest.

Copyright © Jaime Ferreyros

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  1. Date: 2/22/2009 1:30:00 AM
    i like rhymes too... they just bring in the best.. and loved the funny bone you brought with this... yea hell with the rest!! nice one, Jamie ~ Arany

  1. Date: 1/23/2009 11:38:00 AM
    Hey buddy, how have you been? Loved this tongue-in-cheek parody - the underlying sarcasm had me grinning from ear to ear! Have a great 2009! Peace always, J.

  1. Date: 11/29/2008 2:39:00 PM
    My poem was never directed to my very talent poet friends like yourself Rhoda. I was just having fun with those poets that are a bit narrow minded.

  1. Date: 11/29/2008 12:10:00 PM
    Hey, this flows pretty well! I like the message and the essence of the poem. Both rhyming and non-rhyming poems are great to me. This is excellent. Great job! ~ Joseph

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 4:52:00 PM
    I knew it!!! ~lol~ Funny guy. Behave now. Love ya, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 4:38:00 PM
    Correct Shar...I was being sarcastic...just having a little fun... :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 4:29:00 PM
    Oh for goodness sake, some people have no manners. Didn't anyone ever tell you if you didn't have anything nice to say than just zip it - directed to first commenter. Ugh, how rude. Honestly Jaime, I know and admire all forms of your poetry. This is actually different for you! My favorite line is the velvet, lilies, the sun and the moon. A part of me is wondering if you aren't being sarcastic here. are always full of surprises indeed. Happy Thanksgiving my dear! Love, Shar