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Rhymes Betray

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Rhymes Betray

No matter how hard I try to write a scornful prose
Telling you I hate you, rubbing it in your nose
The rhyming always runs away from me
And makes my feelings change to be
The opposite of hate, it's true
In the end, I just simply go on loving you.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2011 1:40:00 AM
    Six lines say a lot with good rhyming. Nice job.