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Rhyme XOX

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Rhyme XOX

I just want my summertime
To be at a stand still.
Sometimes, when women cross my mind,
I'm not sure just what to feel.

I'd like to call her friend,
And I want us to mean something.
I can find several, yet in the end,
It seems like all I have is nothing.

So where is the evidence
That says I should move forward?
Show me a sign that's heaven sent;
A point I should move toward.



©2013 Honestly JT

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  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:14:00 PM
    love your win ....love <3 SKAT

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, PJ

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:44:00 PM
    when one finds their soulmate they know it...the sign will come if you believe...congrats on your win...enjoyed this piece! :) hugs

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:39:00 AM
    This is a nice poem friend,Congratulation on your win

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:16:00 PM
    P J., , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA ~

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 4:56:00 PM
    I can relate so well to this poem, and I think we have all been there before. It would be nice if love came with instructions! Really good work!...Thank you for the kind comments, once again.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 5:42:00 AM
    I often too ask for heaven sent signs : ) .....it's better to move forward, than stand still, take a chance and good luck....awesome write! Hugs

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 5:20:00 AM
    Oh boy i can relate to d feel of too many fish in d ocean alright. Which to tink is d mr. right fish n which is fishy! Hey sir fabulous rhymin, i envy u for yor power of poetic expression. Tnx 4 yor visit too.

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:31:00 PM
    This is a nice lyric that definitely describes a place we all can relate to.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:59:00 PM
    PJ, I enjoyed the poem very much...excellent job! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:44:00 AM
    So lovely and awesome poem you've penned here my dear friend PJ. I like it and so enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing this precious gem of yours. I'm so happy that I stopped by here this afternoon. Belated thanks as well for your precious time reading and commenting on my writes. Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 11:16:00 PM
    Hi PJ, Awesome honest write here..I liked this one..thanks for visiting my humble verse.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 6:09:00 PM
    A very good write my friend. When the time comes the right one will come along. Just enjoy life until then. I enjoyed your write....Peter

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:39:00 PM
    that was an extremely deep and very beautiful piece

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 8:27:00 AM
    I love this piece, P.J., beautifully said! I will enjoy reading more :) Thank you for your kind comments to mine.

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Excellent ! Another poem marked favorite . I am not disappointed reading others today !

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 9:15:00 AM
    A true heart-felt write! loved it.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:58:00 AM
    I had a friend tell me once that if I let God make the choice I could not go wrong. When I least expected it he gave me my sweetie and that was 21 years ago. Trust him you will not be dissapointed.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:29:00 PM
    Nicely done.Love the title you gave it!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 12:17:00 PM
    A very honest and heart felt write, Justice. I hope you get that sign you are looking for soon! :) Thanks for your visits to my work...take care of you!