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Revised Demise

Revised Demise The doctor had bad news for Ted In six more months he would be dead To him it was a bitter pill He still owed money on the bill His death was moved a year ahead Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin June 29, 2019

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2019 1:01:00 PM

LOL, love it

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/7/2019 1:36:00 AM

Love the clever humor here. Super cool poem!

Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/7/2019 9:26:00 AM

Thank you, JWE!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 7/6/2019 9:54:00 AM

Excellent limerick, Ralph. Best compliment I can give you is I wish I had written it. Thank you for stopping by.Best to you. / M

Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/7/2019 9:26:00 AM

Thank you, Maurice.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/2/2019 4:59:00 AM

Black humor but a great one nevertheless dear, Ralph! Much enjoyed! Good luck my friend!

Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/2/2019 7:57:00 AM

Hi Demetrious: If you remember Henny Youngman, I was inspired by his short humor.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/30/2019 5:38:00 PM

Good one, Ralph, thanks for the chuckle. Best of luck in the contest. John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2019 2:22:00 PM

haha, GREAT last line!