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Review Deja vu

Checking for precept in déjà vu preview Abstaining from the way monkeys do Building a meaningful relationship with you Will you be a precept of Adam’s rib come into view The concept of fleshly rib is just not déjà vu No logic of flesh has ever been true for you Seeking new wine of déjà vu preview From sacred heart playing it by ear for you I will ascribe to no bribe, of Pharisee scribe No carnal works of past hobbies shall abide We shall observe that which is true.. in the sky clear and blue As heavenly particles of spiritual bliss come into view The man shall command and flesh will not withstand Brides shall abide in beauty and pride of Agape confide For as the way a human concept see, is the way it shall ever be And the logic by which it sees… shall infest of fleas For as a man thinketh so shall he ever be… In the logic of self pride, until Agape confide Dedicated to Robbie, most current Agape hobby She encouraged the adamant… Agape, grown sloppy. by John Moses Freeman

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:12:00 PM
    A very moving piece of art. You are so talented, I am touched by your every word. Keep up the good work. So much talent John!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Just realized I have not seen your name for a while and I hope and pray all things are well with you. I have not had a lot of time to be on line lately so it takes a while before I realize I have not seen their name for a while. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:38:00 PM
    thankxxx Moses for sharing this dynamic poem and for your lovely comments .. i am not on PS as much due to my hands .. swollen from rhumatoid arthritis since finger surgery ..we r all dealong with some sort of suffering but have faith soon will be well again to type on my own luv .. blessings to u ..

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Really nice and loved this particular line much...."the logic by which it sees… shall infest of fleas"....,bears passion too. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 8:53:00 AM
    Miss you John, where can you ber? Do you know I miss you and what you write. I hope nothing is wrong and you will soon come back! Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Time for a new piece of poetry Moses. I await your reentry into the Soup. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 5:09:00 PM
    Important Soup Mail, John.

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:40:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Sara

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:42:00 PM
    wow this is great,loved it,John

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:25:00 PM
    How beautiful can it be said John. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:14:00 PM
    Hi John, I'm coming back to this one. Sometimes, i'm a bit scared to comment or read your poetry at times. Only because you have concepts that are hard to grasp, I mean to say, sometimes, life and love should not be felt the proper way. your second couplet set, has lots of authority action view. I truly like this one, it comes with the right feelings of Deja vu* been there once not, only through the bible...this is what i really wanted to say this morning. have yourself a good night,..pd

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 4:46:00 PM
    Hi John, something different from you; lots of wonderful points of reference in this especially Ilove the second to last two lines.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 7:18:00 AM
    Good morning, John believe me i really did enjoy your poem, have yourself a lovely day~ALWAYS *PD