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Restless Spirits

Restless spirits traverse ethereal pathways, their essence a glimmer amongst shadows. Dancing between life's denizens, they remember: once they had lived, and loved and dreamt. But now they are mist and restless. Kim Merryman 9/3/13 For Nette's Just Nine Lines Contest Picture 1

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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 9/13/2013 10:09:00 AM
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Kim , congratulations ... always love LINDA
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Skat A
Date: 9/12/2013 8:07:00 AM
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deep beauty Kim, congrats! ~SKAT~
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/11/2013 8:10:00 PM
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now u make me feel restless Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/11/2013 6:03:00 AM
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piercing me to the core, kim.. congrats on your win.. thanks for checking my blog...:) huggs
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 9/10/2013 10:54:00 PM
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Nice write Kim. Many congrats for the win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/10/2013 8:16:00 PM
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very nicely penned....congrats on your win :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2013 4:33:00 PM
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Well done! Congrats.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 9/10/2013 10:04:00 AM
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Just beauteous! :o)
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 9/6/2013 4:20:00 PM
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this is a good entry for nette's contest and fits the picture very well - "their essence a glimmer amongst shadows" and "now they are mist and restless", I like those two lines a lot...thanks for stopping by with your kind comment :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/4/2013 8:40:00 PM
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Hi Kim, Nicely done poem in diamante..I liked this one.. Ken
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/4/2013 3:17:00 PM
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Love your poem Kim. The spirits are restless tonight. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 10:12:00 AM
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- Lovely poem, Kim ! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/4/2013 9:26:00 AM
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Nice entry and good luck
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/4/2013 9:13:00 AM
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great poem, kim!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/4/2013 7:58:00 AM
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I really like your Rictameter and how you showed the restless spirits as mist. Good luck. and I sure wish I could come up with one like this.
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