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Remembering When

I remember when during a night dream I was involved in a soccer game And I was leader of the losing team So, when woke up I felt an endless shame. I remember when I was a clumsy child Trying with the bicycle to run around I fell to ground and my father smiled I still remember of the crash the sound. I remember when I had to tell my love To a splendid girl I wanted really much But when approaching I lost my glove And lost the occasion to get in touch. I remember when my mother told: “Take care of memory of your life You will remember when becoming old. Have happy moments recalling your strife” I remember when the negative events Occurred me in winter and in fall When people had their criminal intents And the worst thing : I remember all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/19/2013 5:21:00 PM
Memory lane is a good place to vissit.It deepens the heart and polishes the soul. Thanks Mario
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Mario De Paz
Date: 6/20/2013 7:53:00 AM
Hi Michael. thank you for commenting, to visit you and your memories is nice too
Date: 6/19/2013 9:35:00 AM
Ah fabulous poetic run down memories. Enjoyd each line how u recollect in rhyme
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:16:00 PM
Great message....memories are treasures that no one can steal from us.... good or bad! I hope you make only good memories from now on. Hugs
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Mario De Paz
Date: 6/19/2013 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Cecilia, it was obviously irony what drove me to write this poem. My best memories are secret!
Date: 6/17/2013 11:43:00 PM
This is exactly what is needed for the contest! Your last line really caught me! Yes....we do remember the good and the bad. Enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for your visit to my work!
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Mario De Paz
Date: 6/19/2013 7:20:00 AM
Dear Eileen, thank you
Date: 6/16/2013 11:51:00 AM
this is a powerful one about memories. I really enjoyed the read.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 6/17/2013 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, always welcome!
Date: 6/16/2013 6:13:00 AM
Mario, I hope you have plenty of wonderful memories too my friend.. I want to thank you for reading my poems. I think you write beautiful and plan to read more.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 6/16/2013 10:12:00 AM
It is a great pleasure to meet friends in this site. You are so kind and I like to visit you any time it is possible
Date: 6/15/2013 8:39:00 AM
yes, remembering could be to make a brighter day or darkened night, the last stanza says it all, enjoyed your write,.. ~always, Linda
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Mario De Paz
Date: 6/16/2013 10:13:00 AM
I only tr to be unpredictable, sometimes. This is irony
Date: 6/14/2013 8:54:00 AM
Beautiful rhyme with a lovely message, I love it! Thank you!
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Date: 6/16/2013 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Demetrio. I am happy you see as lovely my worst memories! Thank you for coming
Date: 6/14/2013 7:44:00 AM
good morning, Mario, I'm not feeling well this morning. I will be back, this afternoon. luv. linda
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