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Reflections of You

Reflections of you are colored in blue like the sky on the day we first met. The sky was so clear; your eyes were so dear. Such a day I could never forget. Reflections of you are colored in blue like the bluebells nearby where we lay. Their scent in the air; your soft golden hair. How I longed in that moment to stay! Reflections of you are colored in blue like the lake where we often would laze. Together and free; your arms around me. Now I yearn for those sweet summer days. Reflections of you are colored in blue like the twilight that too soon would blend with shadows of night as stars lost their light and the love of my life had to end. For the Weepy Quatrain Contest of Laura Loo (I hope multiple quatrains are ok!)

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Date: 9/19/2019 4:00:00 PM
Geez did it take me a long time to find this poem you took your winning excerpt from your poem renamed "Blue!" It was well worth the time I spent searching for it though. I missed reading this beauty Andrea. It is a gorgeous melancholy poem expressing the glorious bliss of love. A very belated Fave from me! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/25/2016 3:12:00 PM
I really like this one Andrea. Congratulations on the win. ...Fran
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Date: 5/24/2016 7:57:00 AM
I see you have chalked up another win with this piece! Congrats Andrea.
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Date: 5/22/2016 9:15:00 PM
This is a beautiful, moving, skillfully-written poem. Congratulations on your win with this 7+ poem, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 5/22/2016 8:41:00 PM
Sad reflections...Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/22/2016 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/22/2016 7:25:00 PM
Andrea, this is pure beauty and it touched my heart so much..thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/14/2013 5:39:00 PM
A fantastic write dear Andrea.This is one of my favorites from you.
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Date: 5/21/2013 10:37:00 PM
Beautifully written and blue is my favorite color. Well just wanted to read a few tonight. Went to see Rylan play ball. The game was only half an hour. I did not get some rest today so off for a early night. Hubby brought home flowers for my birthday. love phyl
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Date: 5/21/2013 2:59:00 AM
Awesome poetry you got here Andrea. I just got my pc back tonight. So I'm trying to catch up ;} I think this is good for a win, if you haven't already won ;}
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Date: 5/17/2013 7:58:00 AM
Fantastic! Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:00:00 PM
Love how your reflections hold such warm thoughts and memories....beautiful write and win Hugs
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Date: 5/16/2013 6:23:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem Andrea, congrats on your win, this is gorgeous :) wishing ou a wonderful day :D hug, Yanny
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Date: 5/16/2013 11:00:00 AM
Congratulation on a well deserved win. Beautifully written. 'Stars lost their light and the love of my life had its end' blended delicately of a love faded. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/16/2013 6:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem!
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Date: 5/16/2013 1:53:00 AM
Congrats on the win :) Beautiful indeed. Love this :)
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Date: 5/16/2013 12:23:00 AM
Enthralling, Andrea. I deserves the win. There was no hesitation...to misplaced word...no untapped feeling! Just amazing!
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Date: 5/15/2013 8:38:00 PM
congrats in the contest*PD
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Date: 5/15/2013 7:00:00 PM
How my heart fell on the last line, Andrea! The song "Stardust" from "Sleepless in Seattle" kept playing in my mind. Hugs and kisses. Roy
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Date: 5/15/2013 6:59:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, I enjoyed reading it this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 5/15/2013 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2013 2:53:00 PM
I thought this would ripple to the surface, congratulations, and on your others, I just don't have the time to keep going through all the contests. Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/15/2013 2:00:00 PM
Congrats on another win, Andrea! I know I've missed congradulating you on others...having a hard time keeping up right now..busy, busy here...but gotta make time for poetry and fishing!
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Date: 5/15/2013 1:32:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 5/15/2013 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations with your winning poem Andrea!
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