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Raven's Sign

Fog settles on the tombstones. In the dark, an eerie blue, the graveyard is a misty ocean Raven passes through. She stops. The solitary site is grim, devoid of sound. Her long black gown, a ruffled slip, is satin sweeping ground. Her sable locks lie smooth and straight across her graceful back. Stark contrast is her alabaster skin to hair pitch-black. This woman - with a beauty that forever captivates - now stands, a pistol in her hand, and there steadfastly waits. Since told the man that she adores (who left some time ago) lies buried here, the woman’s come, for Raven has to know! She can’t believe that he could be here in this place of doom. He’d left for war before they’d barely been a bride and groom. As Raven looks out on the sea of mist, her eyes have teared because those birds that bear her name have suddenly appeared. A sign it has to be, she thinks. The ravens drawing near are circling above one stone. Her heart is seized with fear. Now Raven walks to where the birds are circling above. She pales. . . The stone she’s reading bears the name of her true love. The fog, a sea engulfing all, has swallowed Raven too. Gun raised, she drops down to his grave; she knows what she must do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/16/2015 9:15:00 PM
Like Tim below expressed. "WOW!" Love the win. SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:45:00 PM
Don't do it Raven, don't do it!! Lordy Andrea, what a poem and in couplet form too! "Her sable locks lie smooth and straight across her graceful back. Stark contrast is her alabaster skin to hair pitch-black." WOW...
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:47:00 PM
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:03:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/16/2015 1:49:00 PM
Way to go Andrea.....Congratulations
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Date: 11/16/2015 10:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea! :) *smiles* -LU
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Date: 11/16/2015 10:14:00 AM
Wow Andrea! A stupendous write right from the tombstone to the gunshot! A welldeserved win!
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:24:00 AM
A captivating story with fitting words , I love it. Congrats on this win Andrea...hugs
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:42:00 PM
Oh I like this very much Andrea. Filled with intrigue and wonderfully written. Big congrats on your win! 7
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Date: 2/27/2015 10:35:00 PM
Nice win. SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:57:00 PM
This is such a well deserved win. Your poem draws us in with all our senses at attention.
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Date: 2/24/2015 5:07:00 PM
Wow Andrea that's quite a moment you created for us. Congratulations on a well thought out and constructed write.
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:42:00 AM
Dark, as ravens are, romantic, desperate. Well done Andrea. Well deserved as first place leader.
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Date: 2/24/2015 2:40:00 AM
What a beauty Andrea! Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:18:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful is ur very emotive write Andrea! Congrats on first place win my dear!
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:34:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your First Place win for your amazingly-written, but so sad poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:39:00 AM
This was a fantastic write and you did the photo justice. love phyl
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Date: 2/24/2011 11:30:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:06:00 AM
Many congratulations Andrea on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:37:00 PM
Hi Andrea,congrats on yet another win!A beautiful story you have penned with great rhyming-kash
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:18:00 AM
Perfect rhyming scheme - Amazing poem Andrea! Congrats on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:57:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:39:00 AM
Ooh gruesom ending! Nice storyline, really enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:28:00 AM
a grand prize for a grand piece, andrea... HEADS UP! :) huggs, nette
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