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Randomling Snowflakes

Snowflakes slowly parachuting together In the still of the night On mother nature's military invasion Michael Tor 8/28/2015

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/26/2022 11:55:00 AM

Oh I love this!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:50:00 PM

This is SO cool. had to go way back to earlier poems of yours because I have seen all your newer ones.

James Inman

Date: 9/16/2015 11:04:00 AM

Nice visual.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/22/2015 6:13:00 PM

Thank you James

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/12/2015 2:22:00 PM

This is wonderful. They do float down like parachutes. Great imagery, SuZ

Michael Tor
Date: 9/22/2015 6:13:00 PM

Thank you Suzanne for your nice comments.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/9/2015 3:08:00 PM

Great metaphoric poem, Michael!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/10/2015 11:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Ralph.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 9/9/2015 11:37:00 AM

The mere thought of snowflakes parachuting is amazing! Congrats, Michael!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/10/2015 12:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Balveen for your observation.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2015 9:55:00 AM

I love the image that you created congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Michael Tor
Date: 9/9/2015 10:59:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/9/2015 1:40:00 AM

Very wonderful write Michael n a superb win! Big congrats!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/9/2015 11:00:00 AM

Thank you Dr Upma

Mary Rotman

Date: 9/8/2015 11:21:00 PM

Michael, I have some feedback for you on your winning randomling. If you'd like it, please let me know how i can get ahold of you.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/9/2015 11:01:00 AM

OK Mary. I have to completely register.

Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 1:37:00 AM

Wonderful

Michael Tor
Date: 9/9/2015 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Skat

Constance La France

Date: 8/30/2015 7:04:00 PM

Michael, very nice for the contest and thanks for visiting my poem ~~

Michael Tor
Date: 8/31/2015 7:31:00 AM

Thank you for your sweet comment.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/30/2015 6:31:00 AM

Thank you Sir. I appreciate your thoughtful words.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/30/2015 5:32:00 AM

Majestic image! A seven, dear Michael!

Michael Tor
Date: 8/30/2015 8:10:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios.