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Heavens cotton field
Where thunders light is birthed
An impending rainstorm

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  1. Date: 6/8/2010 12:29:00 PM
    Love the first line !very nice ~Rick

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 1:57:00 AM
    Good work Erastus.Rgds Brian & thanks for yourb welcome comments

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 7:05:00 AM
    Love this Haiku. The first line especially . Sara

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 7:52:00 AM
    I love the clouds as heaven's cotton field ... powerful write.

  1. Date: 6/7/2009 3:42:00 PM
    Delightful poem Erastus>James

  1. Date: 6/5/2009 1:32:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery! I love rainstorms they bring alive erotic birth for me.

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 12:48:00 AM
    Great job, my friend! Lovely haiku. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 11:39:00 PM
    You brought the image to life Erastus.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 4:31:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen