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raindrops on paper

soul fills up,
rain streaks down my cheeks

brightness blinds my world
darkness cloaks and chokes me up...
heaven's tears soothe me

angry skies flash teeth
wind wailing its frustrations--
drenching rain drowns soul

black and red rain
hateful words, scorching wrath boils 
daggers on paper

each word stings eyes, heart
pen takes a stab, then twists hard
raindrops on paper

** jan 15, 2011 for Skat's dark rain contest

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  1. Date: 5/3/2012 7:41:00 AM
    My favorite form! This is amazing! Loved the last line! (and title) But it's sad though...I hope you don't feel like that...

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 1:22:00 PM
    Awesome haiku, Nikko! And thank you for your comments on Snow.

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 4:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:52:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this fine set of very descriptive haiku.

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 12:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this very emotional piece.

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 6:19:00 AM
    Hi Nikko - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 11:14:00 PM
    Aye, such depressing haiku here....but well written. I just read your papaya limerick haha! Uhmmm, I give you an A+ on it being clever. Happy belated New Year 2011~! I returned some soupmail~Piss....I mean, Chris :D~

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 7:38:00 PM
    congradulations on your win. T. S.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:33:00 PM
    enjoyed these nikko, congrats for being in the winners circle. Harry

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:53:00 PM
    Many warm congratulations for this super win.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:29:00 PM
    Nikko, I am glad you made it on the list. WHEW!! Aren't you glad you entered? I think you got yours in just in time. IT is full of so many images and anologies! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, nikko

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:05:00 PM
    Beautiful poetry Nikko, what a joy to read. Many congratulations on your fine win in Skat's contest....:)

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 5:57:00 AM
    Congrats sweet friend Nikko on your stunning success in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry on rain.... enjoy another super win and top tenner today my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 5:45:00 AM
    Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Nikko, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:46:00 AM
    Congratulations Missy on your win in Irma's contest ;) I need some special powers btw

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:04:00 AM
    Nice entry and win Nikko, glad your cold is better and I hoped the warm Soup helped...luv Michael

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 3:39:00 AM
    Congratulations Nikko on your win with this beautiful Haiku!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 12:16:00 AM
    Congratulations, Nikko, a very deserving win for this contest. Very clever. (^_^) Noel.