Rainbow

a rainbow... may its colors bring love and laughter to the heart. 12/31/12

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/23/2013 11:37:00 AM

These are beautiful words Written here. Thanks for sharing. Lucillaq

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2013 5:08:00 PM

Great expressive work..Enjoyed reading this blessing in so few words..Thanks for stopping by..The family has had the virus upset stomach..Not any fun but we are all better..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/8/2013 7:24:00 PM

Reads like something good to put inside a fortune cookie. Short and very sweet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2013 5:48:00 PM

seeing this one again. So lovely. Hope your week gets better and better, dear.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2013 6:00:00 PM

a smile curls on the corners of my lips -- a rainbow [remember Phyll a monoku is simply a haiku writen in a single line..light & love deb

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/3/2013 5:04:00 PM

Good one line. You don't need the apostrophe in "it's".

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2013 11:55:00 AM

Pretty and full of rainbow cheer, my dear!!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/1/2013 2:19:00 PM

love this beautiful monoku, Phyll. Happy New Year to you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2013 2:02:00 PM

a lovely monoku..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2013 5:39:00 AM

Very nice poem Phyllis, and well said. - 2013 is here! - May it be a good year!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)