Rain

There it comes from Looking handsome The condensed pain Poems of lovely rain At the window pane In the flower garden Deep into the brain A moist green smell Sense of feeling well Touch of love so nice Some cucumber slice Cloud after big cloud Lightening very loud Falls in romance drop Plip – plop-plip- plop In the water of strife The canvas of our life Gossip with tree leaf Grows a green belief Red blue yellow pink Florid times to think How nice from train Looks the falling rain Round wet soft view In the glass it is you More than we need Rains as peace bead To our starving vein Welcome sweet rain _________________ August 13, 2016

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/17/2016 7:21:00 PM

Lovely poem, I can almost hear the raindrops dripping.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/18/2016 7:00:00 AM

Thank you ...

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/16/2016 6:42:00 AM

Thank you ... Yours much smaller, as I feel, has been much better, and congrats for your top win too ...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/16/2016 12:02:00 AM

It's like a portrait of rain in a well framed picture plate. Enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/16/2016 6:47:00 AM

The above comment intended for this reply got inadvertently inserted in the comments column ... ha ha ... sorry ... your poem conveys something even beyond your words ...

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/15/2016 10:00:00 PM

Lovely imagery and rhyme in your cascade of 'raining' words, Probir. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/15/2016 10:46:00 PM

Thanks ... Congrats on your win for your 'Pain of Rain' too ..

Janis Thompson

Date: 8/15/2016 7:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I like the meter, rhythm of the poem. It is fast.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/15/2016 10:50:00 PM

Thank you Janis ...

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2016 6:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Probir ! Hug Eve

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/15/2016 10:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve ...

Lu Loo

Date: 8/15/2016 5:06:00 PM

Probir, congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/15/2016 10:54:00 PM

Thank you ...

Nilima Deb

Date: 8/14/2016 12:18:00 PM

A spicy note of rain ...lovely poem.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 10:02:00 PM

As the reader likes to view ... thank you ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2016 10:09:00 AM

Very nice and it looks like a sheet of rain falling down , the lines are so perfectly arranged!

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 10:58:00 AM

Thank you ...

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/14/2016 9:48:00 AM

Hi Probir, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. You painted a lovely picture with your words. I really liked the scene. The rain looks beautiful! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 10:58:00 AM

Thank you ...

Pheko Motaung

Date: 8/13/2016 11:00:00 PM

To the great rhymes thereto i add a seven!thanks

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 2:00:00 AM

And I embrace the unexpected 'seven' with thanks ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/13/2016 8:14:00 AM

I think is the rain season over there dear, Probir! Your verses dance as the rain and so beautiful dance it is that delights the heart and mind! A seven!

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios ... Rains are still on ... Monsoon from Bay of Bengal is quite strong ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/13/2016 8:01:00 AM

I love colorful descriptions in poems. You have used many colors in this imagery filled write. Good luck Probir!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/13/2016 5:34:00 AM

Thank you ...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2016 4:38:00 AM

how vivid!... the flow is like rain cascading, probir..huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 5:38:00 AM

Thank you ... My first 'thank you' to you has gone above as my comment ... ha ha ... Most likely subterranean slip ... May Sigmund Freud live for ever ...

Phillip Garcia

Date: 8/13/2016 4:27:00 AM

That's a thrilling write. I loved it. Crisp and clean to the ear. Very concise. It would have taken me 400 pages to say all you just did.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 5:40:00 AM

Thank you ...