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Rain

. Ah. Can You Smell The rain? In its wake The scent of Nothing. Ah. Can You Feel The rain? Cool drops Fall quickly on The skin, splashing As they make contact. Liquid that quenches The parched skin. Wonderful. . Ah. Can You Hear The rain? The steady Pat, pat, pat, Upon the open Window invades The ears; the head Droops slightly In response.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/2/2009 1:55:00 PM
Good contest entry hear for Oh, What a shape I'm In contest for Concrete poems..a hint..if you put the . at the beginning of the line when you edit your verse you can move the first letter over to anywhere you want. HUGS Light 7 Love
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Date: 9/19/2008 2:50:00 PM
This is so artistic and creative. Concrete poems are a challenge--one you met with a flair. Nice job! I enjoyed it. Keep on writing! Karen
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