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Railway Adventure

I got on the train and was looking for my seat The weather was hot by the summer heat I was so tired that I couldn’t feel my feet I couldn’t either find anybody for me to lead I finally sat; a host came and asked me what to eat I said I wanted some rice and a big piece of meat But make it quick please, do me a great deed It’s good of you for a starving man like me to feed Then I saw a girl with a book about to read With her dark hair held up she looked so neat I didn’t expect somebody this glowing to meet And with her big hazel eyes she looked very sweet A girl like her is just what I need If she was mine I would gently her treat And on somebody this beautiful I’d never cheat Now I feel that she’s the one for me indeed I wanted to talk to her and I hoped I succeed My heart was fiercely starting to beat I wish I could’ve had the words freed But I was afraid she might’ve not on me agreed Then we got off the train into the street I ran after her with my full speed Grabbed her arm, asked her to marry me….. And before her I got on one knee She was so surprised and told me to repeat I could not at that stage retreat Because love in her pretty eyes was guaranteed And with her my life would be complete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/22/2015 8:40:00 PM
Very romantic write ....best wishes
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 1/22/2015 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Joseph very much :)
Date: 1/15/2015 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic rhyme, Mohamed,I truly enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest a winner for sure Blessings sir 7
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 1/17/2015 10:53:00 PM
Thank you Eve so much, very glad you liked it and i hope so :)
Date: 1/15/2015 5:49:00 PM
oh I love the ending to this - good luck in the contest - i wonder if things like this really do happen and if they have a happy ending:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 1/15/2015 6:03:00 PM
Thank you Jan so much, very glad you liked it and i don't think that something like this would really happen that's why i imagined it :) it still could be nice in reality though :)

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