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Quite A Little Wonder

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Quite A Little Wonder

After years of drifting around
It was time to close the show down
No need to be a pretender
We all have our little surrender

To give hope for tomorrow
Could we build on our sorrow?
Should I care about the outcome?
I`ll share with you,its my rule of thumb

There`s a thin line here I know
Love like a dove,or act like a crow
Take me to the limit,I know you can
Push it..squeeze it..see if Im a man

Maybe,if I was just your lover
How much would there be to discover?
So many things you`ve given me to ponder
Kept in my minds envelope,quite a little wonder

March 3rd,2012

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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:43:00 AM
    I love the line given hope for tomorrow, in my minds envelop! many minds has much envelop of things..... nice work.

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 11:49:00 PM
    love the title of this one and how you worked it into the ending line. Uniquely said "in my minds envelop!"

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 3:55:00 PM
    Loved it all! Very much liked the dove/crow concept. :) I love crows...more than doves actually. But that's me. Anyhow, very nice one. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 9:33:00 PM
    Arlid, hi! hi! hi! I'm a good pretender... I think I'm the kind of person who don't put much thought into the outcomes of situations.. I think that is why I am who I am.. and as for your other half.. I like the little juice she gave you to ponder on,, it's up to them how you want to spike the wonder.. like you poem,,ta ta ta..pd ((not feeling myself lately))

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    Date: 3/6/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry neither Irma..think it is the full moon effect approaching! Woahahaha!
  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:09:00 PM
    wow! You're definitely not a lil' wonder! enjoy it alot and thanks for stopping by and your kind comment Arild

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 10:58:00 AM
    Nice write you have here- JH

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 10:54:00 AM
    Not just a "little" wonder Arild, really enjoyed this one, so much depth to it :) Hope your weekend is a great one, love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:27:00 AM
    I like your style Arild. Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, I wear earrings also but somehow the nose rings don't do it for me. in your picture you very closely resemble my late son. He would have been celebrating his birthday today. Congratulations on your featured poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Love the last stanza Arild..awesome xx Hugs

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 2:23:00 AM
    enjoyed the heartfelt sentiment of this gift, arild.. you always deliver!!.. wow.. :) winning huggs if for a contest..:)

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 2:26:00 PM
    Your a stand out poet my friend. Proud to be your friend. Michael

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 12:44:00 PM
    oh Arild an impression write of majestic expression luv.. utterly descriptive .. with depth and feeling .. thankxx for sweet comments on my poem for J. J. luv.. appreciate u thinkj I am amazing.. just a Mom who luvs too much..

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 12:10:00 PM
    No, I am not going to Florida next month...ha ha. At the price of gasoline, I'd have to walk! Well, I could write a Pulitzer prize winning poetry book, become rich and famous, and then buy a house for all of us to stay at!....your thots on this idea!......

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 11:58:00 AM
    GREAT THOTS, ARILD!! Your mind's envelop is great personification!! You are having some fun with this one! Glad you peeed your pants over Elmo! ha ha. GWendolen

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 11:44:00 AM
    Love the descriptive words, a great poem Arild, your poetry has presence, love,vie