Quiet

. drifting silently

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2021 2:05:00 AM

On tiptoes no doubt, Quite an impression this poetry makes. Two words wow that is indeed so skilful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2013 3:36:00 PM

just here to tell you merry Xmas!!

Skat A

Date: 9/30/2013 8:31:00 AM

James, great couplet.............SKAT

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/28/2011 10:06:00 PM

Simple and to the point. ;) Very thought provocative nevertheless.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2011 7:57:00 AM

Stopping by to wish you a happy Easter.. enjoy with all good things that come... p.d.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/4/2010 8:08:00 AM

typo. .wish me not to come last at least :)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/4/2010 8:06:00 AM

re comment i think to hide in a barrel is better than the chimney,lol.Have a great wkend you and dear little Noah:). By the way at last i entered a contest. .its andrea's haiku me a xmastree :). .the name of my haiku is' a christmas postcard'. .i still don't know how i entered. .lol. .Wish me not to come at least :)i did my best. .read you around.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/20/2010 9:08:00 AM

Ahhh that sounds so peaceful and serene. God Bless Phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2010 3:23:00 PM

I love the aimless change here James, love the way the silent travels from place to place,..Miss,..p.d.

James Peranteau
Date: 5/27/2021 12:31:00 AM

ooops...coming soon ;] Much love, james

James Peranteau
Date: 5/27/2021 12:29:00 AM

By the by, yep And hey dear poet friend uv mine.. Look 4 the write from yours truly

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/17/2010 10:14:00 AM

i imagine a room. .with soft music. .trickling drop echoes ,me relaxing on a masage bed with white linen sheets. .white cream on my face,cucumbers on my eyes. .candles around. .and apart from that silence and these words whisperin'drifting silently' drifting silently,ssh. .relaxing hypnosis here James. Ilikeit!: )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2010 6:50:00 PM

Very interesting mini poem. and now I need to read a few more from you. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2010 6:13:00 PM

Ahh, James. This is me...at night...on my waterbed waiting for dreams to take hold. There is such a comforting feel to this lovely couplet! Love you, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2010 3:45:00 PM

Ah the essence of the Quiet.. so important to refreshment James.. now the new Dioditsu form is simple... 7/7/7/5 ...four lines with these syllables on luv... our fav subject... or humor too it states in the form... so enjoy and let me know when u have finished your creation so I can read luv.. be blessed this happy though rainy day..luv..

David Smalling

Date: 11/16/2010 10:51:00 AM

This image creates a thousand images and start a cascade in the mind ... an avalanche of delight.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/16/2010 8:38:00 AM

In a boat...in a bed...in a dream. So many driftings come to mind. I like this poem mucho. LOve, Dave