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Quicksand Vortex

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Quicksand Vortex

Quivering on the surface
Underneath is chaos
Inching too close now
Cesspool of disaster
Known to be deadly
Sinking, swim desperately
Activate survivor mode
Never believe you are infallible
Death can be the result

Vision is clouded
Opportunity to save self drifting
Relax don`t panic
Try to tread sand like water
Examine your surroundings
X-treme survival tactics

Sept 15th, 2013
Rick zablocki
Build Your Own Sand Contest

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  1. Date: 10/27/2014 1:29:00 AM
    truly excellent piece of writing rick love how you painted this

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 1:16:00 AM
    Rick, , Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:11:00 PM
    congratulations on your win...Linda

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:44:00 PM
    words of wisdom

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:14:00 PM
    How true! Congratulations

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:43:00 PM
    Good advise when faced with quicksand, congrats on your winning poem xxxx

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 1:01:00 PM
    This is powerful Rick. I loved every word. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:24:00 AM
    well done Rick, great write ...Seren

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:33:00 AM
    very clever take on the contest... the acrostic and your words penned perfectly... congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:29:00 AM
    One can almost feel the sand swallowing them into the creative! Well done Rick.....congratulations on this exciting and scary ride!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:17:00 AM
    An amazing write my dear friend Rick. I extremely enjoyed reading it tonight. Many hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:00:00 AM
    lovely write Rick congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:53:00 AM
    I love the title and poem. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Rick, many kudos for this talented acrostic!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Tread sand like water. Interesting poem. Loved it!! Betty